Robert Celebrates Father's Day
Twenty first in the Robert's Adventures Series12 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
Perfect timing, in both that Father's Day is just around the corner and your rhyme scheme. I loved the story of Robert Marcus Frederick Dune. .......meeshu
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Perfect timing, in both that Father's Day is just around the corner and your rhyme scheme. I loved the story of Robert Marcus Frederick Dune. .......meeshu
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you for this nice review. I love writing about Robert but especially like people reading about him.
Comment from Michelle Wood
I love this! This is very cute! I think that every Fathers day should be this special. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for sharing this!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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I love this! This is very cute! I think that every Fathers day should be this special. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for sharing this!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your kind review, i appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from Janilou
I really enjoyed your poem. It was such a nice glimpse into the life of a happy and well-cared for and loved child. The interaction between the parents and Robert was great.
I found nothing to suggest for corrections or edits. It's a delightful poem.
Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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I really enjoyed your poem. It was such a nice glimpse into the life of a happy and well-cared for and loved child. The interaction between the parents and Robert was great.
I found nothing to suggest for corrections or edits. It's a delightful poem.
Jan
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you, these are my favorite poems to write. Robert has many new adventures in store! Thanks again.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I went back and found another of these that was still paying. Fun stuff, and you've written another winner. I like the boy's name... it's almost musical. :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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I went back and found another of these that was still paying. Fun stuff, and you've written another winner. I like the boy's name... it's almost musical. :)
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thank you...I've actually written 23 of them...it's so much fun I can't stop!
Comment from Teri7
This is another well written poem about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune getting ready for Father's Day. You used very good and cute words with great imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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This is another well written poem about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune getting ready for Father's Day. You used very good and cute words with great imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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As always, thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent lyrical Father's Day tribute. The rhythm added to the excellent end and internal rhyme make the words move smoothly when they are spoken aloud. I like the way you used the boy's name. It makes the poem special, so personal.
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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This is an excellent lyrical Father's Day tribute. The rhythm added to the excellent end and internal rhyme make the words move smoothly when they are spoken aloud. I like the way you used the boy's name. It makes the poem special, so personal.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. It means so much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from hifein
what a poetically lovely tribute to dad. well written. rhyming sequence works well and poem flows from beginning to end in an interesting way. lovely for children as well as adults.
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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what a poetically lovely tribute to dad. well written. rhyming sequence works well and poem flows from beginning to end in an interesting way. lovely for children as well as adults.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
It told a story in rhyme, it had a consistent smooth flow, it made the reader feel at ease, it was worded well and conveyed emotion, it was just enjoyable, so good work on this poem
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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It told a story in rhyme, it had a consistent smooth flow, it made the reader feel at ease, it was worded well and conveyed emotion, it was just enjoyable, so good work on this poem
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thank you :)
Comment from Sherman541
I don't know what to say about Robert anymore- I love your poems about him and I really wish I could think of something new, more then I love these, but at least it is all true I really do, love them. :) Sherman
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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I don't know what to say about Robert anymore- I love your poems about him and I really wish I could think of something new, more then I love these, but at least it is all true I really do, love them. :) Sherman
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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You don't know how much I appreciate your input and encouragement. Thank you.
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As Always, you are so very welcome :)
Comment from fluffnstuff
Another poem for your upcoming book I imagine? So very cute it is and I feel like I am living a little life with this sweet boy. Nice write. Fluff
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Another poem for your upcoming book I imagine? So very cute it is and I feel like I am living a little life with this sweet boy. Nice write. Fluff
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, im so glad you like Robert.
