Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dan,

So glad to hear things are progressing so nicely. I can't truly believe that you're the kind of guy who's gonna be chasing any nurses but it's a fun image. *smile* Thanks for the laugh.

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thanks for the comments. I have worked many years in hospitals in various positions, I was an Aide for years, an Emergency Medical Technician and now in housekeeping. Chasing nurses has been part of my history as we worked together sometimes with my leading the moves in urgent care. I do not chase nurses but help keep them running at times.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about your speedy recovery. It is best to be careful and not overdo the walking without a cane in case of a slip that can cancel all the good work.

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Dan, your verses illustrate really well your road to recovery. Glad you are getting better. It is just an improved you who will be able to function must better. Have a good night. WELL DONE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Very interesting poem and x Ray, I'm glad to hear that your doing well. I could use some new knees as mine are shot, but I fear I'm not as brave as you and couldn't take it as well. I hope all goes good in your life and on Fanstory.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

A cleverly written poem, that keeps us updated on your progress with your new hip...all I can say, is that you have some serious 'fairy' magic going on -- coupled with your hard work and determination, is a recipe for SUCCESS! I can see the motivation too, is chasing the nurses! That'll get you off your keister! Ha!

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from Timothy casarez

Good

Well written and It seems to me that you fought for a quick recovery good mind set also seems that you wanted to hurry up and get back to your normal routine

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I have two of those insidious hip replacements. Better than the alternative. It has just moved in and your body doesn't know if that is okay a foreign substance and all... thanks so much. yours, diana

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from meeshu

Good

is this free verse in stanzas? it seems like some rhymes are sprinkled in. the cadence is a little choppy, but that can fixed with a couple word changes. all and all it is pretty good

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 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent poem that shows how well you are healing after surgery. I like the line about chasing the nurses. This is the first poem I have ever read about a hip replacement!

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

ahahahah It sounds like you're getting better if you are thinking about chasing the nurses. I liked this poem and I hope you make a full recovery and the hip works better than before. I noticed no errors and nice to see you posting today, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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