Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I need to lock it in a chest
and never have to deal
with it again
This made me wonder if the poem was about fishing at all ...something deeper
God bless

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thanks for reading. I wasn't sure if they used chests in fishing. I thought maybe
chests of ice to keep the fish fresh, if you are fishing for a long time. Fishing
is just a metaphor.

Joan

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi (let me see if I can remember; is it Joan?). I hope all is well. I think it could do with a note or two. What I am getting from this is that he/she wants to hide away the problem, not deal with it and hope it never gets out again. Kind of a stick your head in the sand. What I am not sure of is whether or not it is a good or bad thing to not deal with the problem. Good luck in the potlatch. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for reading and commenting. I was actually going for the opposite. That she is fishing for a solution or any solution so the problem is over and done with and she never has to think about it again and can move on to other things.

Joan

reply by Pamusart on 21-May-2018

That was my other choice. I could see it both ways. Thank you