Unique Last Will and Testament
lune-contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from HaleyBel
I liked this, so few words but speaks volumes. The picture, words and title, all tie in so perfectly and of course, it carries the most important message of Gods Love and sacrifice.
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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I liked this, so few words but speaks volumes. The picture, words and title, all tie in so perfectly and of course, it carries the most important message of Gods Love and sacrifice.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Aww, thanks so much, Haley, I wasn't sure if the message came through clearly. I'm so pleased you understood and I'm thrilled with all the stars. :))
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from joycetreasures
This was an enjoyable read for this 5-3-5 Lune haiku with some very powerful spiritual words. Yes, Jesus is the author and the executor of everything in the world. Also, you used a great title, "Unique Last Will and Testament" to go with your words also. I found no errors, but a lovely message. Nice picture also to represent your message. Good job. Thanks
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This was an enjoyable read for this 5-3-5 Lune haiku with some very powerful spiritual words. Yes, Jesus is the author and the executor of everything in the world. Also, you used a great title, "Unique Last Will and Testament" to go with your words also. I found no errors, but a lovely message. Nice picture also to represent your message. Good job. Thanks
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the lune poem contest. You used very good words and I love the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the lune poem contest. You used very good words and I love the art work you chose to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from royowen
Praise God for Jesus, the author and finisher of our faith, a brilliant saviour, friend, Lord and brother. Where else can we turn, only to Him. Well done my friend, you have written a brilliant lune poem. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Praise God for Jesus, the author and finisher of our faith, a brilliant saviour, friend, Lord and brother. Where else can we turn, only to Him. Well done my friend, you have written a brilliant lune poem. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from aanneee
I wish you well in the contest. You said a lot in very few words and admirably so. The art just couldn't be better ..that alone speaks volumes and with the words nothing could be misconstrued at all. Thank you so much...Dinah
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I wish you well in the contest. You said a lot in very few words and admirably so. The art just couldn't be better ..that alone speaks volumes and with the words nothing could be misconstrued at all. Thank you so much...Dinah
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from Breanna Clark
Wow. I would love to know your mindset when writing this. There is so much simple truth in this. That's what makes it so effortlessly beautiful. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Wow. I would love to know your mindset when writing this. There is so much simple truth in this. That's what makes it so effortlessly beautiful. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, good Lune poem for the contest and best of luck with this entry. I think you are saying that Jesus is the author and finisher of our faith, and I agree entirely. Lovely picture you've used to accentuate your carefully chosen words.
I have no suggestion for improvement and would recommend this to other readers for review, Ana.
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Hello, good Lune poem for the contest and best of luck with this entry. I think you are saying that Jesus is the author and finisher of our faith, and I agree entirely. Lovely picture you've used to accentuate your carefully chosen words.
I have no suggestion for improvement and would recommend this to other readers for review, Ana.
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from meeshu
that is an unusual will of trust, I think it has only been tried once. a very good use of the lune style, which makes for tiny poems. good luck in contest
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that is an unusual will of trust, I think it has only been tried once. a very good use of the lune style, which makes for tiny poems. good luck in contest
Comment Written 21-May-2018
Comment from Artasylum
Great presentation on this one. The words are pitch perfect and the image has an ancient feel making it whole. Thanks so much and good luck in this contes. Yours, diana
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Great presentation on this one. The words are pitch perfect and the image has an ancient feel making it whole. Thanks so much and good luck in this contes. Yours, diana
Comment Written 21-May-2018
