Dance of Life
A Rondel6 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
As difficult as this form looks to do and do correctly, Anonymous Poet, you seem to have pulled it off while making it look quite easy.
I'm sure it's not.
We all dance to the tune of a different drummer.
Some much different than others.
Best wishes to you in the Rondel Poetry prompt.
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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As difficult as this form looks to do and do correctly, Anonymous Poet, you seem to have pulled it off while making it look quite easy.
I'm sure it's not.
We all dance to the tune of a different drummer.
Some much different than others.
Best wishes to you in the Rondel Poetry prompt.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Dean. We should all stay true to ourselves - it's what keeps it interesting!
Comment from royowen
Well done, an excellent rondel, as an entry in this poetry contest. Really about internal optimism, rising from the ashes by one's own internal resources.. The repeated refrain in five syllables and tetrametric lines the others. Beautifully written in articulate smooth verse. Excellent job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Well done, an excellent rondel, as an entry in this poetry contest. Really about internal optimism, rising from the ashes by one's own internal resources.. The repeated refrain in five syllables and tetrametric lines the others. Beautifully written in articulate smooth verse. Excellent job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Appreciate very much your reading and offering your insights on my attempt at a rondel.
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Most welcome
Comment from apky
Beautiful artwork that is as graceful as your Rondel Poem; the same beautiful flow, the same vividness of meaning.
Excellent favs:
Disappointment cuts like a knife,
but inner power keeps us strong
Separate ourselves from the throng
to march to our own drum and fife
in the dance of life
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Beautiful artwork that is as graceful as your Rondel Poem; the same beautiful flow, the same vividness of meaning.
Excellent favs:
Disappointment cuts like a knife,
but inner power keeps us strong
Separate ourselves from the throng
to march to our own drum and fife
in the dance of life
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thank you for stopping by to read and offer your insightful comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a true feeling of living, in the dance of life we do not get to choose the song, situation and state of affairs in our courses of living is unexpected, only our inner power keeps us strong; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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This speaks a true feeling of living, in the dance of life we do not get to choose the song, situation and state of affairs in our courses of living is unexpected, only our inner power keeps us strong; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a pretty poem. I loved the topic, "The Dance of Life." A wonderfully written Rondel poem. I was not familiar with the format, but you have met the challenge perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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What a pretty poem. I loved the topic, "The Dance of Life." A wonderfully written Rondel poem. I was not familiar with the format, but you have met the challenge perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Appreciate very much your positive and insightful review.
Comment from zanya
Yes a distinctly philosophical touch here in this Rondel reflecting on the journey of life and how we might deal with its inevitable ups and downs 'march to our own drum and fife'.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Yes a distinctly philosophical touch here in this Rondel reflecting on the journey of life and how we might deal with its inevitable ups and downs 'march to our own drum and fife'.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights.
