Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

First I must apologize for not reviewing your work as often as I used to but I live in hell presently and finding my way out seems impossible....This my brother is a most wonderful read as I could feel myself riding above the surf with the wind filling the sails in the beautified sunny sky wishing us all a most wonderful shared day of inclusions delights instead of watching spot soar we all join spot and soar along and experience the jubilation in the first person....So well written my brother....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 26-May-2018

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reply by the author on 27-May-2018

Thanks Cranial. No need for apologies among friends, I have infinite respect for you.
If you like this, you would also like Waiting Weary Warriers, alliteration with W.
May we soar with Spot!

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a unique poem using the letter "S". I like the variety of words in your poem that makes this a fun poem to read out loud. I like "snicker-snacks" as one line.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful review. It is an Honor and pleasure to write with you here. And I really enjoy your kind and specific reviews.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Comment from Bucketlist

Exceptional

Alliteration always astonishes almost any adult admiring applicable aptitude!

I feel like a kindergartener in comparison to your advanced alliterative abilities!

A fun read, blessings
Trisha

 Comment Written 20-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and consider this. Thanks, for you are a-muse-d here!~

Thanks for your thoughtful review. It is an Honor and pleasure to write with you here. And I really enjoy your kind and specific reviews.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

reply by Bucketlist on 24-May-2018

You are always welcome, I enjoy our reciprocal FS link. I feel blessed

Comment from aanneee

Excellent

Perfect picture choice for this piece which is owned by the 'S's, obviously so. Very cleverly done but I have to admit I tripped constantly over my tongue trying to read it properly. So I thank you for the sore tongue and for the delightful read - Dinah

 Comment Written 20-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful review. It is an Honor and pleasure to write with you here. And I really enjoy your kind and specific review.

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

So many fun sounds in your poem made entirely of S words, Darren! I feel like you make lots of references both to music, other poems and even children's first reading books. Fun one.

 Comment Written 20-May-2018

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reply by the author on 20-May-2018

Thanks so much, I have been having fun with these. I really appreciate your kind review, and this will be in my next book.