Star of Fantasy
Different orbits15 total reviews
Comment from karenina
All I could think of is "Ain't it the truth though?" (smile)----If only our bodies stayed where our minds feel we should be! I look in the mirror sometimes and think who is THAT woman? I feel thirty! Sadly (or fortunately as I'd rather not be dead) I'm more than twice that! (LOL)
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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All I could think of is "Ain't it the truth though?" (smile)----If only our bodies stayed where our minds feel we should be! I look in the mirror sometimes and think who is THAT woman? I feel thirty! Sadly (or fortunately as I'd rather not be dead) I'm more than twice that! (LOL)
Karenina
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Lol. Thank you for your delightful review and five star rating
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I know but it's TRUE! (LOL)
Comment from Boogienights
Wow! This is extremely awesome. Love the image, your words and the idea behind them. It's hard to come up with a one line poem that really stand out...yours did.
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Wow! This is extremely awesome. Love the image, your words and the idea behind them. It's hard to come up with a one line poem that really stand out...yours did.
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thank you Boogienights for your lovely review and excellent rating
Comment from Artasylum
My vote Pam is that you don't listen to your body... always stay in orbit a much better place to live. thanks as always to you and as every looking forward daily. yours, diana
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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My vote Pam is that you don't listen to your body... always stay in orbit a much better place to live. thanks as always to you and as every looking forward daily. yours, diana
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thank you Diana for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam how well said wouldn't it be marvelous and absolutely wonderful if the two could be on the same Orbit. Yes the artwork is very complimentary to the poem and sets the atmosphere for much thought.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Pam how well said wouldn't it be marvelous and absolutely wonderful if the two could be on the same Orbit. Yes the artwork is very complimentary to the poem and sets the atmosphere for much thought.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much Mary for one of your precious six star ratings. I really appreciate it. Thank you for your lovely review also
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My pleasure
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes indeed the body and mind do work in different realms with the mind having a much wider stretch.
Excellent one line poem and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Yes indeed the body and mind do work in different realms with the mind having a much wider stretch.
Excellent one line poem and I wish you the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an interesting and thought provoking poem you've penned here. I like the message here and how you've brought it forth in so few words. The body indeed is planted here but not so with the mind. Well done Pam!
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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This is an interesting and thought provoking poem you've penned here. I like the message here and how you've brought it forth in so few words. The body indeed is planted here but not so with the mind. Well done Pam!
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you Jeffrey for your wonderful review and five star rating Nice to see you
Comment from royowen
What an excellent entry in this one line poem contest, our mind dwells on fantasy. There's a parable that says, "things seen are temporal and passing away, but things unseen are eternal." Therefore, what is reality?. Well done, good luck, Pam, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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What an excellent entry in this one line poem contest, our mind dwells on fantasy. There's a parable that says, "things seen are temporal and passing away, but things unseen are eternal." Therefore, what is reality?. Well done, good luck, Pam, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you Roy for your wonderful review and excellent rating
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Welcome Pam
Comment from ameen786
Wow! This is profound and beautiful Pam, if I may quote Milton, ""The mind is its own place and in itself, can make a Heaven of Hell, a Hell of Heaven." As you so wonderfully said, "Mind orbits the star of fantasy,"-because only the mind has the capacity to imagine; I thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Wow! This is profound and beautiful Pam, if I may quote Milton, ""The mind is its own place and in itself, can make a Heaven of Hell, a Hell of Heaven." As you so wonderfully said, "Mind orbits the star of fantasy,"-because only the mind has the capacity to imagine; I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you Kamran for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from kiwijenny
Very interesting, I've often thought about how our body feels like the earth is flat when we know it's a sphere. I think these two orbits you speak of define the human condition.
He has made everything beautiful in its time. Also, he has put eternity into man's heart, yet so that he cannot find out what God has done from the beginning to the end. - Ecclesiastes 3:11
We have eternity in our heart/mind but our physical body plants us in time. But there's the yearning for more ...always
Well penned
God bless
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Very interesting, I've often thought about how our body feels like the earth is flat when we know it's a sphere. I think these two orbits you speak of define the human condition.
He has made everything beautiful in its time. Also, he has put eternity into man's heart, yet so that he cannot find out what God has done from the beginning to the end. - Ecclesiastes 3:11
We have eternity in our heart/mind but our physical body plants us in time. But there's the yearning for more ...always
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you kiwijenny for your delightful review and excellent rating
Comment from apky
Your One Line Poem has already won the contest if it was up to me to decide. This line is so profound. The mind, a free spirit, roams in realms far beyond the body, and although the body houses and feeds the mind, that free spirit would never transport the physical body to the realms the mind travels to.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Your One Line Poem has already won the contest if it was up to me to decide. This line is so profound. The mind, a free spirit, roams in realms far beyond the body, and although the body houses and feeds the mind, that free spirit would never transport the physical body to the realms the mind travels to.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you apky for the luck and for your delightful review and five star rating
