Pondering Parent Passed
alliterisen potlatch post2 total reviews
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
The poem itself was thought provoking and captivating, the construct of the poem was solid, the syllable count was spot on, but all together it was a strong piece and a good read
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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The poem itself was thought provoking and captivating, the construct of the poem was solid, the syllable count was spot on, but all together it was a strong piece and a good read
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thanks for such strong encouraging comments and for all the stars.
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Comment from Pamusart
Hi dragonpoet. This a
Is a good entry for your potlatch challenge. There is alliteration in every line. I would dread having my mother or father look down at me. But I am so happy that you had love from your parents. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Hi dragonpoet. This a
Is a good entry for your potlatch challenge. There is alliteration in every line. I would dread having my mother or father look down at me. But I am so happy that you had love from your parents. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this poem. I appreciate your kind comments,
Joan
