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Comment from mermaids
I like how the characters are Lady Bugs, a very unique story and I love Lady Bugs. This is a creative and unique poem that tells a story and reflects modern culture. Beautiful pic too.
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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I like how the characters are Lady Bugs, a very unique story and I love Lady Bugs. This is a creative and unique poem that tells a story and reflects modern culture. Beautiful pic too.
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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Thanks Elaine.
More serious work coming.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today.
Comment from Liberty Justice
"Lady the Bug" is such an amazingly story. The way this story is described and roles characters play are astonishingly entertaining. Such an amusing story the way Daddy Bug protects his daughter and watches who she dates. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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"Lady the Bug" is such an amazingly story. The way this story is described and roles characters play are astonishingly entertaining. Such an amusing story the way Daddy Bug protects his daughter and watches who she dates. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thanks Miss Liberty and the ending...
Will be...
Precious.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today j
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
It was a joyous read, the characters were likable, the story had a good flow and constructed nicely, it had good dialogue, it was all good my friend .............
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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It was a joyous read, the characters were likable, the story had a good flow and constructed nicely, it had good dialogue, it was all good my friend .............
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thanks Phil and the ending today will be precious.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
