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R.U. Afraid of the NRA?

Who do politicians work for?

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Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem
The irony is the 2nd amendment doesn't even protect guns
If states passed or the congress passed laws restricting guns
the constitution would affirm those laws
But few of the present congress will stand against the NRA
Good luck with your entry
Well said
RS

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

Comment from meeshu
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a good haiku 5-7-5 poem. a very strong statement in large print. unfortunately based on a false premise. are these really the only two choices? I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

Comment from tfawcus
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A hot issue. My heart bleeds very time I hear of another of these tragic massacres in the US. I imagine that it will take positive action at the ballot box to bring about change.

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

Comment from Ogden
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Your point is well-taken, and gaining public concurrence. We'll need a groundswell of determined opposition to the NRA and the politicians in its thrall.

I expect your entry to get a good reception in the contest.

Don

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 Comment Written 19-May-2018

Comment from mermaids
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This is an excellent poem that is relevant to today. I am more concerned for our children than the rights of gun owners. Excellent 5-7-5 form and I wish you well in the contest.

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 Comment Written 19-May-2018