Never the Same Again!
my try at a minute poem23 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've done well with your first Minute poem Teri just one suggestion - (your or the) big ordeal - to make it a 4 syllable line as required. Nicely rhymed and well told,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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You've done well with your first Minute poem Teri just one suggestion - (your or the) big ordeal - to make it a 4 syllable line as required. Nicely rhymed and well told,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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Thank you so much for the very nice review and comments! I will check out the syllable count. love, Teri
Comment from l.raven
HI Teri, I wish I had a six my sweet friend...you did an awesome job at your minute poem...and I love your poem...we need to bow and give praise to God...let Him know we believe in Him...you did a wonderful job....my wonderful sweet girl...very nicely written...and what a beautiful picture...love you much girl...Linda xxoo
I hope you and Tom are doing well...xxoo
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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HI Teri, I wish I had a six my sweet friend...you did an awesome job at your minute poem...and I love your poem...we need to bow and give praise to God...let Him know we believe in Him...you did a wonderful job....my wonderful sweet girl...very nicely written...and what a beautiful picture...love you much girl...Linda xxoo
I hope you and Tom are doing well...xxoo
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thank you so much my friend. Believe it or not, it is the thought that counts today! love you!!! Teri
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your a sweetheart...and soooo very welcome...love you...xxoo
Comment from sandy montgomery
It is fantastic to take on new challenges. You definitely made this one. Exceptionally written with a great message. You did well. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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It is fantastic to take on new challenges. You definitely made this one. Exceptionally written with a great message. You did well. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 22-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-May-2018
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Thank you Sandy for the lovely review, comments and lovely six stars! May God bless you my friend~ love, Teri
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful minute poem, Teri, with great rhyme and flow.Indeed we have to keep Faith and Trust in the Lord, he will help us through when we need Him. Well done!! Fia
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Wonderful minute poem, Teri, with great rhyme and flow.Indeed we have to keep Faith and Trust in the Lord, he will help us through when we need Him. Well done!! Fia
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thank you so much Fia for the lovely review and nice/true comments! love, Teri
Comment from nancyjam
There is a beautiful message in your Minute poem.
It seems to be in correct form, with excellent rhymes.
Only trust in our Lord can bring us true peace and
happiness.
I love your accompanying photo. Fits the poem perfectly.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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There is a beautiful message in your Minute poem.
It seems to be in correct form, with excellent rhymes.
Only trust in our Lord can bring us true peace and
happiness.
I love your accompanying photo. Fits the poem perfectly.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much Nancy for the very lovely review and comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This minute poem is excellently done and the message is not lost in the syllable count. Each part has a healing message for us
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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This minute poem is excellently done and the message is not lost in the syllable count. Each part has a healing message for us
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much Barb for the very nice review and comments! love, Teri
Comment from Rubylou
Hello Teri,
Yes, we must trust the Lord even when , in our own understanding, it seems an impossible task.
I like your first stanza best as it reminds me of being wrapped in a warm blanket of safety.
Nicely written,
Rubylou
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Hello Teri,
Yes, we must trust the Lord even when , in our own understanding, it seems an impossible task.
I like your first stanza best as it reminds me of being wrapped in a warm blanket of safety.
Nicely written,
Rubylou
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and comments! love, Teri
Comment from MelB
Hi Teri, I think you did a fine job on this minute poem. Excellent syllable count and a wonderful message about trusting God. Well done and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Hi Teri, I think you did a fine job on this minute poem. Excellent syllable count and a wonderful message about trusting God. Well done and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the lovely review and comments! When it is all said and done God is the only one we can truly trust! He is our creator! love you! Teri
Comment from c_lucas
One plus the love of the Christ is a majority. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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One plus the love of the Christ is a majority. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you Charlie for the very nice review and comments! Blessings, Teri
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You're welcome, Teri. Charlie
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like it and the wonderful inspirational message that it conveys. Everyone needs to know this and come to the knowledge of it. I always enjoy reading a well written faith filled poem. Well done Teri!
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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I like it and the wonderful inspirational message that it conveys. Everyone needs to know this and come to the knowledge of it. I always enjoy reading a well written faith filled poem. Well done Teri!
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the very nice review and comments! Blessings, Teri
