Harry and Meghan
So overwhelming watching history being made today.16 total reviews
Comment from mvbrooks
Very timely poem and the fact that a British Royal (Harry) married the class of Americans treated most like royalty (actors), it truly was a uniting of lands. It was a beautiful love story.
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Very timely poem and the fact that a British Royal (Harry) married the class of Americans treated most like royalty (actors), it truly was a uniting of lands. It was a beautiful love story.
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Luvs2rite4u
Oh, my what wonderful structure and using verbs intended for your poem was absolutely grand. You showed the reader the impact and truth concerning this wedding. Your imaginative words played softly on the tongue. The stanza was explosively written. Your use of the picture was perfect. Thank you for such strong work ethics. Luvs
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Oh, my what wonderful structure and using verbs intended for your poem was absolutely grand. You showed the reader the impact and truth concerning this wedding. Your imaginative words played softly on the tongue. The stanza was explosively written. Your use of the picture was perfect. Thank you for such strong work ethics. Luvs
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thanks for the wonderful review. Much appreciared.
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You are welcome
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You're welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Harry and Meghan, looks right and joins the emblematic United States idea of racial equality and blended cultures with what is ironically known as the whitest family in the world. To the future!
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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This 5-7-5, Harry and Meghan, looks right and joins the emblematic United States idea of racial equality and blended cultures with what is ironically known as the whitest family in the world. To the future!
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Thanks for the great review. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse has a clear story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Many thanks. Much appreciared.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
this is a nice piece although I'm not so sure unification is quite on the cards... lol
I like Harry so good luck to him.
And to you in the competition.
GMG
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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Hi there,
this is a nice piece although I'm not so sure unification is quite on the cards... lol
I like Harry so good luck to him.
And to you in the competition.
GMG
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 21-May-2018
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It is just a little ditty I wrote on Saturday when I got all caught up in the pomp and circumstance while watching it on T.V.
I love Harry so fingers crossed huh? Thanks for tbe comments.
Comment from lyenochka
This very concisely covers this historical wedding. I do wish them the very best as they seem to have a heart to do good with their fame and influence. And they don't seem to have the controversy of the previous wedding between Edward and Wallace.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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This very concisely covers this historical wedding. I do wish them the very best as they seem to have a heart to do good with their fame and influence. And they don't seem to have the controversy of the previous wedding between Edward and Wallace.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so mu h clr your comments.
Comment from kathleenspalding
I rarely give a five - seven - five poem six stars because they're pretty short and easy, but this has such a beautiful rhyme, rhythm, structure, and sentiment that it certainly deserves it. Perfect use of artwork, colors, and font. Well done! Thank you for writing and sharing; I needed something positive today. :-)
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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I rarely give a five - seven - five poem six stars because they're pretty short and easy, but this has such a beautiful rhyme, rhythm, structure, and sentiment that it certainly deserves it. Perfect use of artwork, colors, and font. Well done! Thank you for writing and sharing; I needed something positive today. :-)
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review and super stars. So glad you limed it.
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You're welcome :-)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
A very nice tribute to the wedding of two nations. This is a very special poem. In just three lines you have written a historical account. Well written.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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A very nice tribute to the wedding of two nations. This is a very special poem. In just three lines you have written a historical account. Well written.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Many thanks Liz for your kind words.
Comment from JDRBAR
Very well done. It's another historic day in England. I hope these newlyweds manage to live beyond the royal charades and find true happiness together.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Very well done. It's another historic day in England. I hope these newlyweds manage to live beyond the royal charades and find true happiness together.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Pantygynt
This 5-7-5 captures the international and multiracial aspects of this union that caught the imagination of this country judging by the crowds turned out to watch the procession.
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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This 5-7-5 captures the international and multiracial aspects of this union that caught the imagination of this country judging by the crowds turned out to watch the procession.
Comment Written 20-May-2018
reply by the author on 20-May-2018
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Many thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. Do I suspect that you don't fully support this event?
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You may suspect but your suspicions are totally unfounded. I wrote a tanka on the subject yesterday.
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Sorry. Got it wrong.
