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Comment from mermaids
Excellent free verse form that captures a light feel and flow to your words. "A leaf letting go of summer" is a line shows nature being alive. The leaf is a character that has to live through all the seasons.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Excellent free verse form that captures a light feel and flow to your words. "A leaf letting go of summer" is a line shows nature being alive. The leaf is a character that has to live through all the seasons.
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Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 22-May-2018
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Thanks for the excellent review and all your wonderful comments supporting this poem, I appreciate it. Glad you felt like that leaf, escaping the seasons and flying away ....estory
