Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

I love your poem... it being about animals got my attention -- cause I am a big animal lover/activist.... Animals, teach ME how to love.. they give freely of their devotion, loyalty, humor, sass, and unconditional love.. and they ask nothing in return... who do we know, as a another human bean that can honestly love like that?? your form was cute, and the words played with each other... thanks for sharing this upbeat, clever and witty message...

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and sweet Homonym poem you have penned for the writing prompt. I love the words you used and I feel the same way about the little animals. I am sorry you missed the contest! love, Teri

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from kiwijenny

Good

I'm not sure you used any homonyms . These are words like piece and peace. Balled and bald. They sound the same but are spelled differently. Since this is for a competition maybe edit your poem to add some. Sum and some.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, good writing and a great Homonym from the writing prompt. I think you have some great imagery and the poem has been so nicely published with the picture. I have no suggestions for improvement and noticed no errors. Thanks for sharing your poetry, which I found a pleasure to read and review, Ana.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from mvbrooks

Good

I'm confused -- was this poem meant to be entered into the homonym poetry contest? It does not seem to contain any homonyms at all -- just the repetition of the rhyme love/dove.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Animals are instinctive and will warm to those who consider them and give, they don't know why it is happening but just accept life as it is, maybe we should just do the same, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

Comment from krys123

Good

Cheers, Ine;
-This is what the contest requires: "poem with homonyms at the end of sentences (e.g. piece, peace.)"
-This means that the last words have to be repeated And sound the same but have different meanings.
-You just have written a poem without any homonyms.
-The last line of the poem should have been to words like, and I'll write one for you:
"if the world could give some piece/peace."
Then the people would have a craft/craft." (Craft is in a boat and craft is in a hobby)
-Do understand where they're coming from now?
-Good looking the contest, Ine, , and take care and have a good one my dearest friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

---

reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely weekend.

reply by krys123 on 19-May-2018

You are welcome, Ine.
Alex