Selfie smile
Sedoka Poem/ Per Mona Lisa con Amore5 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Hi, Zanya
Thanks for entering my little contest. I thought this was a perfect Sedoka in every way. You've followed the form exactly as it was intended with two different takes, both very insightful and from different perspectives. Voting can be weird around here. I'm guessing folks were swept up in the grandiose verbiage most of us went for. LOL In any case, this was a gem. mike
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Hi, Zanya
Thanks for entering my little contest. I thought this was a perfect Sedoka in every way. You've followed the form exactly as it was intended with two different takes, both very insightful and from different perspectives. Voting can be weird around here. I'm guessing folks were swept up in the grandiose verbiage most of us went for. LOL In any case, this was a gem. mike
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Wow ..now that is encouragement indeed !! 'a gem'- I thought it was an interesting contest - looking at a famous piece of art and seeing how it still engages our attention...what a significant phrase 'grandiose verbiage'----!! thanks for taking time to comment zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Aha;
Well, you seem to have hit on some reality here. The problem is that there are no cameras or even phone cameras allowed in the Louvre. The Mona Lisa has a constant guard, so I don't think there are too many selfies taken with this artwork.
Great premise for your contest entry though,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Aha;
Well, you seem to have hit on some reality here. The problem is that there are no cameras or even phone cameras allowed in the Louvre. The Mona Lisa has a constant guard, so I don't think there are too many selfies taken with this artwork.
Great premise for your contest entry though,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Great -thanks for reading and comments zanya
Comment from K Arlington Andrews
Liked how you said so much with so few words. Liked how you showed the painting is a timeless masterpiece by placing it as a lure for selfies after 5 centuries. Engaging
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Liked how you said so much with so few words. Liked how you showed the painting is a timeless masterpiece by placing it as a lure for selfies after 5 centuries. Engaging
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Per Mona Lisa con Amore' writing prompt.
Your verse tell well of the Mona Lisa.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Per Mona Lisa con Amore' writing prompt.
Your verse tell well of the Mona Lisa.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a unique take on this contest. I love the "lures tourists for selfies" which is so true of our modern society. A great entry for the Mona Lisa contest. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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What a unique take on this contest. I love the "lures tourists for selfies" which is so true of our modern society. A great entry for the Mona Lisa contest. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Superb review ..zanya
