Man, Animal & Nature
a contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Ameen you are so gifted and talented to be able to compose the various types of poems in one presentation. They were elegantly writen and uniquely composed. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-May-2018
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Ameen you are so gifted and talented to be able to compose the various types of poems in one presentation. They were elegantly writen and uniquely composed. Great job.
Comment Written 19-May-2018
reply by the author on 19-May-2018
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Mary my friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much and have a great weekend.
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My pleasure. And thank you
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi ameen-
You have gone over and above - using 7 types of poetry instead of just the 3 types as a minimum requirement for the contest. You have concisely dealt with the same topic in all these different styles. Good luck in the contest.
Kim
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Hi ameen-
You have gone over and above - using 7 types of poetry instead of just the 3 types as a minimum requirement for the contest. You have concisely dealt with the same topic in all these different styles. Good luck in the contest.
Kim
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Hello Dovey, my friend I appreciate your visit and am pleased that you like the write; thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! You managed to make seven different poems. Enjoyed reading each one. I especially liked the monostitch:
"While man's captive of his guilty conscience, animal is free of one!"
You show the differences between man and animals well.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Wow! You managed to make seven different poems. Enjoyed reading each one. I especially liked the monostitch:
"While man's captive of his guilty conscience, animal is free of one!"
You show the differences between man and animals well.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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My friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is the same theme in a lot of different forms as the contests asks. I like how it shows how animalistic man be. I like the ABC poem and the monostitch the most
I have never here of the shadorma.
Good luck and keep writing
drangonpoet
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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This is the same theme in a lot of different forms as the contests asks. I like how it shows how animalistic man be. I like the ABC poem and the monostitch the most
I have never here of the shadorma.
Good luck and keep writing
drangonpoet
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
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Comment from l.raven
HI Kamran, WOW!!!!... my sweet friend...this is awesome...and so very well written...I love all the different poems...and their forms...you should do well in the contest...I love your picture...and you are so right...we take their land...they have nowhere to go...they have no choice but to come to ours...well done...and good luck...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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HI Kamran, WOW!!!!... my sweet friend...this is awesome...and so very well written...I love all the different poems...and their forms...you should do well in the contest...I love your picture...and you are so right...we take their land...they have nowhere to go...they have no choice but to come to ours...well done...and good luck...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Hello again my friend, I am grateful to you for your wonderful/encouraging comments; thank you very much.
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you are so welcome my sweet friend...love xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm quite sure some will give you grief about the syllable count in your senryu, Kamran. But the fact remains that hyphenated words only count as one so the rest falls into place.
As for the myriad of other poetic formats you've decided to use they all read just fine to me.
Best wishes to you in the voting booth.
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I'm quite sure some will give you grief about the syllable count in your senryu, Kamran. But the fact remains that hyphenated words only count as one so the rest falls into place.
As for the myriad of other poetic formats you've decided to use they all read just fine to me.
Best wishes to you in the voting booth.
~Dean
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Dean my friend, I am honored and humbled by your visit and thank you for the kind review and good luck wishes.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Joan E.
What an inventive combination of forms with a great deal of food for thought! (I think in the first and second stanzas, "shows" lost its "s".) I see you could not resist alliteration, especially in the last two forms. Best wishes with your tour de force! -Joan
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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What an inventive combination of forms with a great deal of food for thought! (I think in the first and second stanzas, "shows" lost its "s".) I see you could not resist alliteration, especially in the last two forms. Best wishes with your tour de force! -Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Joan my friend, I thank you for the correction and I've corrected already; you see, I always have problems with my grammar as English is not my mother tongue; I appreciate your time and the wonderful comments.
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You do extremely well, my bilingual friend! Cheers- Joan
Comment from BeasPeas
You have done an excellent job with this multiform composition. I like how you have labeled each one for the reader. Impressive. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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You have done an excellent job with this multiform composition. I like how you have labeled each one for the reader. Impressive. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Hello friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from nartoonla
HI, Now thanks to you know all the different styles of writing a poem, thank you.
And in all the styles I came to know, found them deep and well put. Excellent Job.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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HI, Now thanks to you know all the different styles of writing a poem, thank you.
And in all the styles I came to know, found them deep and well put. Excellent Job.
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Hello nartoonia, my friend, I am pleased that you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Multi-Form Madness is a great contest and you've written some perfect poems worthy of a win. I loved the man versus animal theme topic you chose to keep throughout. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Multi-Form Madness is a great contest and you've written some perfect poems worthy of a win. I loved the man versus animal theme topic you chose to keep throughout. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Cindy my friend, so glad you stopped by and like the write; I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
