A free verse about women.
A free verse for the club.17 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
Wow... women are getting the short end of the stick with this... Is this your brother, your sister... both horrifying and heartbreaking. thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Wow... women are getting the short end of the stick with this... Is this your brother, your sister... both horrifying and heartbreaking. thanks so much and looking forward. yours, diana
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second part of the week.
Comment from c_lucas
Insanity is the flip side of genius. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Insanity is the flip side of genius. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second part of the week.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Robina, there is quite a story in the lines of your poem. A personal account and I enjoyed learning about your family. I am the same, I make male friends easier than female ones. I don't like bitchiness, but I'm good at switching off when all my sisters start banging on about someone. I noticed one thing I will bring to your attention.
My grandmother from mothers (site) Did you mean 'side'? Anyway, it is a tiny thing and doesn't detract from the depth of your writing, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Hello Robina, there is quite a story in the lines of your poem. A personal account and I enjoyed learning about your family. I am the same, I make male friends easier than female ones. I don't like bitchiness, but I'm good at switching off when all my sisters start banging on about someone. I noticed one thing I will bring to your attention.
My grandmother from mothers (site) Did you mean 'side'? Anyway, it is a tiny thing and doesn't detract from the depth of your writing, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second part of the week.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem has many random thoughts. I guess if one uses their imagination they are linked, maybe because it's mostly about women, but you do bring in men. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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This poem has many random thoughts. I guess if one uses their imagination they are linked, maybe because it's mostly about women, but you do bring in men. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second part of the week.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What an honest and poignant look at your deepest secrets. You show a lot of deep-seated emotions toward many and with good reasons. OH, I have a niece with Graves disease. She really struggles (eye surgery).
How sad for your sisters, too. I did enjoy your poetic nature, however. I'm thankful your outlet is poetry (it's the greatest therapy)!!
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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What an honest and poignant look at your deepest secrets. You show a lot of deep-seated emotions toward many and with good reasons. OH, I have a niece with Graves disease. She really struggles (eye surgery).
How sad for your sisters, too. I did enjoy your poetic nature, however. I'm thankful your outlet is poetry (it's the greatest therapy)!!
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second part of the week.
Comment from Gloria ....
Love your artwork choice, Ine. It pairs well with your poem that most aptly includes a vast and varied history of women in your family. Very personal and authentic write here and an excellent addition to the free verse club, although I think you may have missed the entry area. Not a big deal at all.
My pleasure to read and review,
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Love your artwork choice, Ine. It pairs well with your poem that most aptly includes a vast and varied history of women in your family. Very personal and authentic write here and an excellent addition to the free verse club, although I think you may have missed the entry area. Not a big deal at all.
My pleasure to read and review,
Gloria
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind suggestion, Ine. Have a great and blessed second part of the week.
Comment from royowen
You've had a sad life concerning your sisters Ine. I think most families have their problems, beautifully written my friend, I hope you do well in the free verse contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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You've had a sad life concerning your sisters Ine. I think most families have their problems, beautifully written my friend, I hope you do well in the free verse contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind suggestion, Ine. Have a great and blessed second part of the week.
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Most welcome
