A Photographic Journey
An American Tragedy55 total reviews
Comment from MelB
I loved watching Johnny Carson. He had a quick wit like no other and I loved that smirk he would get on his face. I'm so sorry for your loss. That is an awful tragedy.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
I loved watching Johnny Carson. He had a quick wit like no other and I loved that smirk he would get on his face. I'm so sorry for your loss. That is an awful tragedy.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey MelB,
In person if he didn't know you he would be a difficult conquest to try and create a relationship with. It took me 5 and having an incredible sense of humor (5 years) to get into the inner circle... once in always in. His sardonic grin carried on into his private life always a treat to see. thanks so much for your wonderful review. yours, diana
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I suppose it is hard for those who are famous to let others into their inner circle.
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Truer word!
Comment from HaleyBel
Tragic and heartfelt as your story in poetry unfolded. It is clear and concise. Thank you, for sharing this difficult time in your life. May he rest in peace.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
Tragic and heartfelt as your story in poetry unfolded. It is clear and concise. Thank you, for sharing this difficult time in your life. May he rest in peace.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey Haley... what a welcome review and thought look at my writing. thanks so much. yours, diana
Comment from Jesse James Doty
What a harrowing tale! I am so sorry for you and for Johnny. And for all of those photos which will never be made or seen by anyone. I like the narration of you in the first person. You lead up to the conclusion very well, with suspense and attitude built right in, for good measure. I read your Author's notes after I read your poem. The sadness deepens for me as you write that you and Rick were together for 12 years. A long time, by anybody's standards. I agree that "A parent should never have to bury a child." It is not clear to me how this fits into the rest of the sad story. The poem flows well and I love the last line, which says, "his legacy is intact along with his perfect vision!" At least Rick does leave a legacy for all to view. We all want to be remembered after we die. This tribute pays homage to a man who made a huge impression on you, and I gather, many others, as well.
Thank you for telling your story in poem form.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
What a harrowing tale! I am so sorry for you and for Johnny. And for all of those photos which will never be made or seen by anyone. I like the narration of you in the first person. You lead up to the conclusion very well, with suspense and attitude built right in, for good measure. I read your Author's notes after I read your poem. The sadness deepens for me as you write that you and Rick were together for 12 years. A long time, by anybody's standards. I agree that "A parent should never have to bury a child." It is not clear to me how this fits into the rest of the sad story. The poem flows well and I love the last line, which says, "his legacy is intact along with his perfect vision!" At least Rick does leave a legacy for all to view. We all want to be remembered after we die. This tribute pays homage to a man who made a huge impression on you, and I gather, many others, as well.
Thank you for telling your story in poem form.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Jesse James.
I always enjoy your reviews... thanks so much for the generous and thoughtful and for your wonderful insights. I really admire your work... Always, looking forward to your writes. yours in gratitude. diana
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Thanks. I feel flattered by your response to my review. I am glad you enjoy my insights. I put my all into my reviews. Your gratitude is well received.
Jesse
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Me too... that is why I appreciate you they never dismissive. keep writing. yours, diana
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Yes, I noticed that about you right away. You are very good at reviewing and getting to the source of the message. Let's both keep writing.
Jesse
Comment from ameen786
Aw, so sorry my friend; a gravitating story with vibrant verses telling the chilling story and I can imagine how difficult and painful it must have been to bury a child; thank you for sharing and God bless.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
Aw, so sorry my friend; a gravitating story with vibrant verses telling the chilling story and I can imagine how difficult and painful it must have been to bury a child; thank you for sharing and God bless.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey ameen,
I always look forward, to your reviews. they are thoughtful. I love reading your poems and always look forward.
Comment from mvbrooks
I'm sorry for your loss and your pain is expressed clearly in the story as you took us along for Rick's final trip. The piece is very well-written and causes the reader to see the journey and also feel some of the pain. I'm glad that the legacy/photos are of comfort.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
I'm sorry for your loss and your pain is expressed clearly in the story as you took us along for Rick's final trip. The piece is very well-written and causes the reader to see the journey and also feel some of the pain. I'm glad that the legacy/photos are of comfort.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Rick's final trip to be sure. Thanks as ever for your thoughtful complete review. always a pleasure. yours, diana
Comment from judiverse
This Tragedy must have changed your life, as the details are so engraved in your memory. The time, the officers' call, and then the responsibility of calling Rick's dad, Johnny. It must have been so painful for you to make that call. You do end with a somewhat positive note about the legacy of Rick's photography. There is no way of knowing why these tragedies occur. Excellent writing. judi
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
This Tragedy must have changed your life, as the details are so engraved in your memory. The time, the officers' call, and then the responsibility of calling Rick's dad, Johnny. It must have been so painful for you to make that call. You do end with a somewhat positive note about the legacy of Rick's photography. There is no way of knowing why these tragedies occur. Excellent writing. judi
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey Judi... It did change my life instantly. In essence even though this poem drips heavy in angst it is also a tribute to Rick and Johnny too. thanks for the glittery star. yours, diana
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You're welcome. I'd love to hear how Johnny Carson reacted to the death of his son sometime. It must have been difficult. judi
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Hey Judi... I have to run out but PLEASE remind me and I will tell your that period of time and the oddest it was... Don't forget. yours, di
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It should be interesting. judi
Comment from Air Spirit
Wow! What a powerful and painful poem... your paint a picture full of loss, unmitigated sadness and remembrance of another time, place and face... a face that you loved, and who captured the faces of others in the pictures he painted... with his photos -- gifts of insight, perspective and 'perfect vision.' I am so sorry for your loss -- there are literally no words.....
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
Wow! What a powerful and painful poem... your paint a picture full of loss, unmitigated sadness and remembrance of another time, place and face... a face that you loved, and who captured the faces of others in the pictures he painted... with his photos -- gifts of insight, perspective and 'perfect vision.' I am so sorry for your loss -- there are literally no words.....
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey Air,
What a thorough and thoughtful and lovely review. Very nicely penned and thanks so much for the stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from humpwhistle
Perhaps it's a case of deja vu, but I seem to recall reading
a slightly different version of this tale a few days ago.
Is this akin to Warhol's multi-colored versions of Marilyn?
Just curious.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
Perhaps it's a case of deja vu, but I seem to recall reading
a slightly different version of this tale a few days ago.
Is this akin to Warhol's multi-colored versions of Marilyn?
Just curious.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hey humpwhistle... the prior poem was a characterization of my father and his questionable ways..l Thanks so much for the stellar review kiddo. yours, diana
Comment from William Ross
a sad but well written free verse on this interesting piece of writing. tells a great story. Thanks for sharing the work. have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
a sad but well written free verse on this interesting piece of writing. tells a great story. Thanks for sharing the work. have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Thanks ever so.... William. yours, diana0
Comment from meeshu
this is so sad, Art. I feel so bad that we had this happen. I feel stupid reviewing your work after that, but it is well versed and Centurion would be cool in the eighth stanza........meeshu
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
this is so sad, Art. I feel so bad that we had this happen. I feel stupid reviewing your work after that, but it is well versed and Centurion would be cool in the eighth stanza........meeshu
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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I'm off to check Centurion out... I thanks perhaps you are right. thanks for the stellar review. Yours, diana