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Little Leaf

A leaf that fell

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Comment from Katya
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This is a nice little verse. I thank you for posting it for us to read. It sounds good, and it is a sweet concept. I'm not sure I understand "everything seems to be in matter of fact"--do you mean "in order"? Just a question.

 Comment Written 13-May-2018

reply by the author on 15-May-2018
    Katya, Thank you for the stars and yes, in order means exactly what you thought. Chowchow
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello ChowChow, nice to meet you in this poem, which was quite delightful. Poets can write about anything, and this poem proves it. I liked the imagery and nothing jarred. It is a work I'd recommend to other readers for review, Ana.

 Comment Written 13-May-2018

reply by the author on 15-May-2018
    Beautiful name!!! Thank you so very much for your comment. It does me justice. Chowchow
Comment from HaleyBel
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What a lovely little poem. I preferred the first half to the second but it is still cute. This would be good for the children, light hearted, descriptive and poetic.
Nice small captivating poem for your first entry on FanStory.

 Comment Written 13-May-2018

reply by the author on 15-May-2018
    Thank you Haley. This is my first time with this type of story, but I have placed many others on this very sight for years. And yes, it is for children for their parent to read to them at an early age. Thanks again. Chowchow
Comment from Old Soldier
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Made me smile. Well done. I see you have a talent for telling children's stories. What a wonderful gift God has blessed you with. Welcome to the site. Not quite a month here myself. Thanks for sharing and keep reading and writing.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2018

reply by the author on 15-May-2018
    Thank you for your comment. What I meant is the type of poetry. I I've been on Fanstory with my poetry and stories for years. Thank you again I do appreciate it. Chowchow
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very sweet little short poem you have penned for your first on here. You used very good and sweet words. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 13-May-2018

reply by the author on 15-May-2018
    Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. This was the type of poem it is. I have written many that have been on Fanstory about different things. Chowchow