Little Leaf
A leaf that fell15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An autumnal write as leaves are falling everywhere ust now and we see them in the parks and towns and I don't think they feel any pain, your words are endearing and caring here, love Dolly x
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An autumnal write as leaves are falling everywhere ust now and we see them in the parks and towns and I don't think they feel any pain, your words are endearing and caring here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
Comment from chocoletdrop052
This is so endearing and scrumptious, Better is the right way to a leaf, but when they fall, they float down in slow motion as not to get injured, but to join other leaves. Thank you for sharing that journey with us..
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This is so endearing and scrumptious, Better is the right way to a leaf, but when they fall, they float down in slow motion as not to get injured, but to join other leaves. Thank you for sharing that journey with us..
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
Comment from royowen
I must admit I've never thought of a leaf falling and hurting itself, it seems like tough thing. This poem is rather unique, so well done for posting, well done, good job, blessings Roy
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I must admit I've never thought of a leaf falling and hurting itself, it seems like tough thing. This poem is rather unique, so well done for posting, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the falling leaves when their lives come to an end. We wonder if they get hurt when they fall on the hard ground or did they have a soft landing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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A very well-written poem about the falling leaves when their lives come to an end. We wonder if they get hurt when they fall on the hard ground or did they have a soft landing.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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I picture their landing as being a soft one. Thank you for your reply. Chowchow
Comment from meeshu
this is a really cute little poem, Chow. I like it a lot, I thought you would go with intact rather than matter of fact, seems it would make more sense. but that's just me.............meeshu
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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this is a really cute little poem, Chow. I like it a lot, I thought you would go with intact rather than matter of fact, seems it would make more sense. but that's just me.............meeshu
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Thank you meeshu Chowchow
Comment from Mistydawn
Welcome to fan story I do hope you enjoy your time here. What a cute little poem about a leaf. It's well-written very interesting has a nice steady flow. Your word choice and artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Welcome to fan story I do hope you enjoy your time here. What a cute little poem about a leaf. It's well-written very interesting has a nice steady flow. Your word choice and artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Thank you. Chowchow. You can read more if you go to Chowchow.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What fun! And I love the levity added in talking to the little gift from nature's palette -- your prose certainly flows well and keeps the reader on a high note to the end!
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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What fun! And I love the levity added in talking to the little gift from nature's palette -- your prose certainly flows well and keeps the reader on a high note to the end!
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Thank you...
Thank you Y.M. Roger, for your reply Chowchow
Comment from yuccabarry1
Great little poem. Descriptive and easy to read and envision. If this is your first piece then I would love to see more of your work. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Great little poem. Descriptive and easy to read and envision. If this is your first piece then I would love to see more of your work. Keep writing!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for the five stars.. If you go to my page, you will find many others. Chowchow
Comment from Gloria ....
What a great poem. Clean direct lines, but the emotional tone is strong. And yes, even the little fallen leaf has come great company.
Very nice and my pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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What a great poem. Clean direct lines, but the emotional tone is strong. And yes, even the little fallen leaf has come great company.
Very nice and my pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much Gloria for viewing and replying to my poem. Chowchow
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
OH, what a sweet little poem. I loved the personification of the leaf as you try to speak to it. Lots of detail and description in such few words. A well-written poem. A joy to read.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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OH, what a sweet little poem. I loved the personification of the leaf as you try to speak to it. Lots of detail and description in such few words. A well-written poem. A joy to read.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Cindy, Thank you very much for your reading and reply. Chowchow
