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I chose to write about Egypt for this particular poem
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Comment from
BermyBye50
Miranda,
I like this 5-7-5 you've written. It captures the drama of the artwork yet it lacks a stronger finish.
Maybe "fiercely fall away"
Just an idea.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-May-2018
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Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write and I enjoyed the movement of the sands rising and then falling in waves, and of course sand storms can be deadly, best of luck with the contest, lvoe Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2018
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