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Sand Dunes

I chose to write about Egypt for this particular poem

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Comment from BermyBye50
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Miranda,

I like this 5-7-5 you've written. It captures the drama of the artwork yet it lacks a stronger finish.

Maybe "fiercely fall away"

Just an idea.

All the best in the contest,

Eugene

 Comment Written 12-May-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a clever write and I enjoyed the movement of the sands rising and then falling in waves, and of course sand storms can be deadly, best of luck with the contest, lvoe Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-May-2018