Humans ... HAHAHA!
Hilarious Animal Perspective Poem9 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Michael;
-Yes, I pretty much sure I can spot your work and it is always dynamically impressive and composed with such feeling and humanistic behavior.
-I think this is brilliant with this personification of the Eagles and I thought of a smaller prize, like just pooping on their head, but To Bust their balloon is fantastic!
-Good luck in the contest my friend take care and have a good one.
Alex
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Cheers, Michael;
-Yes, I pretty much sure I can spot your work and it is always dynamically impressive and composed with such feeling and humanistic behavior.
-I think this is brilliant with this personification of the Eagles and I thought of a smaller prize, like just pooping on their head, but To Bust their balloon is fantastic!
-Good luck in the contest my friend take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 13-May-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I enjoyed your witty take for this writing prompt. You've chosen some funny word choices. This is a solid entry for the witty animal 5-7-5 contest. I wish you lots of luck.
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I enjoyed your witty take for this writing prompt. You've chosen some funny word choices. This is a solid entry for the witty animal 5-7-5 contest. I wish you lots of luck.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
Comment from BermyBye50
This full of excellent laughter inducing humor. The artwork works perfectly with the wit expressed in this very funny 5-7-5 poem. The sarcasm in the first line is truly a hoot.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
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This full of excellent laughter inducing humor. The artwork works perfectly with the wit expressed in this very funny 5-7-5 poem. The sarcasm in the first line is truly a hoot.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute witty animal 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. It looks like the bird (eagle) is trying to say something! Very cute job. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very cute witty animal 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. It looks like the bird (eagle) is trying to say something! Very cute job. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me laugh and I wonder what other creatures think of us and the contempt they have for us, love this example! Best wishes, love Dolly x
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He he he, this made me laugh and I wonder what other creatures think of us and the contempt they have for us, love this example! Best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your Eagle speak is funny.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your Eagle speak is funny.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from meeshu
very good haiku, that laughing eagle picture is perfect and classically funny with the poem. great job...great luck in the contest.......meeshu
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very good haiku, that laughing eagle picture is perfect and classically funny with the poem. great job...great luck in the contest.......meeshu
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from victor 66
The human race would have been extinct long ago if animals had the intelligence and common sense that you have given them here in your poem. I remember the movie, THE BIRDS long ago. Your piece here is almost as scary. Good luck in the contest.
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The human race would have been extinct long ago if animals had the intelligence and common sense that you have given them here in your poem. I remember the movie, THE BIRDS long ago. Your piece here is almost as scary. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a witty animal 5-7-5 but I want these eagles to stay away from my hot air balloon when I ascend at the Albuquerque Balloon Festival. I love the cartoon quality of the captured conversation.
My only suggestion is to omit the quotation marks all together because this poem is entirely dialogue of one eagle.
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. I wish you contest success.
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This is a witty animal 5-7-5 but I want these eagles to stay away from my hot air balloon when I ascend at the Albuquerque Balloon Festival. I love the cartoon quality of the captured conversation.
My only suggestion is to omit the quotation marks all together because this poem is entirely dialogue of one eagle.
Thank you for sharing and making me smile. I wish you contest success.
Comment Written 12-May-2018
