This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Mildred Continues to Worry Veronica"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sandra, is Mildred dead? I hope not! No, please don't tell me. I don't want to know until the next chapter. She really was very tired, and James is worried too. Now, on top of it, I hope the car with the children was nowhere near the bypass. I can't wait reading on. Wonderfully written as usual.
I'm flying back to London tonight, and then I catch the flight up to Glasgow when we land tomorrow morning. I've had a wonderful time, and now it's suddenly over. Sigh. I am looking forward to seeing my friend Marjory, though. I've sent Alexis a message, but she hasn't come back. Is all OK in France?
A big hug. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Oh, Sandra, is Mildred dead? I hope not! No, please don't tell me. I don't want to know until the next chapter. She really was very tired, and James is worried too. Now, on top of it, I hope the car with the children was nowhere near the bypass. I can't wait reading on. Wonderfully written as usual.
I'm flying back to London tonight, and then I catch the flight up to Glasgow when we land tomorrow morning. I've had a wonderful time, and now it's suddenly over. Sigh. I am looking forward to seeing my friend Marjory, though. I've sent Alexis a message, but she hasn't come back. Is all OK in France?
A big hug. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my friend. All will be revealed on Tuesday! No I won't tell you. :))
I hope you have a lovely flight home, where are you staying in Glasgow? Is that where your friend Marjory lives?
Don't worry about Alexis, she is on a high at the moment . She's sorted all her problems herself and didn't need to pay men to do it. (apart from the roof) She is probably relaxing and watching a film on the tele. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I'm glad to hear that Alexis is fine. Tell her I'll try skyping her from Scotland. Marjory lives in a lovely area near Lenzie some miles from Glasgow. I'm so looking foeward to seeing her. xxx
Comment from aryr
Wow, make that a double wow, Sandra. This was a good chapter of recall for Veronica's activities. She was wise enough to acknowledge that both James and Mildred were also involved in the adventures, just in a different way. It was sad that she was so concerned about Mildred and sadder still that Mildred had quietly slipped away on her own adventure. I eagerly away the final part. This was so well done and even with the sadness was enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing my friend, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Wow, make that a double wow, Sandra. This was a good chapter of recall for Veronica's activities. She was wise enough to acknowledge that both James and Mildred were also involved in the adventures, just in a different way. It was sad that she was so concerned about Mildred and sadder still that Mildred had quietly slipped away on her own adventure. I eagerly away the final part. This was so well done and even with the sadness was enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing my friend, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thank you so very much for this really lovely review, Ali. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Yes, Tuesday will be the final part, so I hope to see you then! Big hugs, my friend Sandra xxx
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You are so welcome Sandra, mmmm now is that my Tues or your Tues, just teasing you. Hugs my friend.
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Definitely my Tuesday! LOL :) xxx
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LOL
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's been a journey I won't soon forget. Imagining all the things that could happen in adventures back in time for all of us. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I'm hoping Mildred is okay, and maybe just drifting off a bit. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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It's been a journey I won't soon forget. Imagining all the things that could happen in adventures back in time for all of us. I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I'm hoping Mildred is okay, and maybe just drifting off a bit. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Aw, thank you Ric. Come and find out on Tuesday how it all ends, and how the next book will start! I've enjoyed all your reviews, my friend, thank you for always being there. Big hugs Sandra xxx
Comment from giraffmang
Bloody Tuesday... oh, come on!
she would have poo-hoo'd - is this right. I thought it was common to use pooh-poohed.
put on a big act as to how brave his was - he was.
'I've something to show you ... later,' he said in his teasing way. - Oh... please let it be a hedgehog crossed with a turtle.... oh it's just a ledger entry - BOO! lol
picked up his briefcase/ put it back in his brief case - one or the other spelling here, not both.
When I was in Mrs Humphries body - apostrophe needed.
I met before her mother died forty Years later - years.
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Bloody Tuesday... oh, come on!
she would have poo-hoo'd - is this right. I thought it was common to use pooh-poohed.
put on a big act as to how brave his was - he was.
'I've something to show you ... later,' he said in his teasing way. - Oh... please let it be a hedgehog crossed with a turtle.... oh it's just a ledger entry - BOO! lol
picked up his briefcase/ put it back in his brief case - one or the other spelling here, not both.
When I was in Mrs Humphries body - apostrophe needed.
I met before her mother died forty Years later - years.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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I swear my words know when you are coming to review and jumble everything up!!! LOL!
Poo-poohed, mine is far more refined! lol. :))
Hedgehog crossed with a turtle !!! LOL, What we get then? A spiny tortoise??? OMG!!! LOL.
I'll let you have the others, but I will correct them first. Your reviews are so funny! Thank you so much, Gareth. Pop in Tuesday afternoon, and check it out then, if you are still talking to me. I think everyone will be waiting to read the last part now. (at least, all the people who have followed it) Like we were for yours. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Noooo! She's just sleeping. You can't get rid of Mildred. Who will take care of the children when Val goes time traveling? You sure have a talent for making me feel like I am there. Well done my dear friend. Nancy
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Noooo! She's just sleeping. You can't get rid of Mildred. Who will take care of the children when Val goes time traveling? You sure have a talent for making me feel like I am there. Well done my dear friend. Nancy
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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I'm sorry, Nancy, I know everyone loves her and I knew I would get some bad press for this, but.... Tune in on Tuesday for the final part. Thank you so very much for another lovely review, my friend. Big hugs Sandra xxxxx
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Sandra. Wonderful job done wonce again in this chapter,my friend. I see we are up to chapter 47. Will it be climxing soon. Fifty chapters will be a lot for apublished books you know.
Your images are very effective. Like here. "'You've done well,' I told her, giving her shoulder a squeeze." (It's those small things like that which bring scenes to life,my friend.
Blessings. Bob
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Hi, Sandra. Wonderful job done wonce again in this chapter,my friend. I see we are up to chapter 47. Will it be climxing soon. Fifty chapters will be a lot for apublished books you know.
Your images are very effective. Like here. "'You've done well,' I told her, giving her shoulder a squeeze." (It's those small things like that which bring scenes to life,my friend.
Blessings. Bob
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thank you so very much, my dear friend, for the lovely 6 stars. The last part will be posted on Tuesday. That will actually make it 24 chapters, of around 3000 words per chapter, 74000 words for the whole book. I have split my chapters up for FS, as they readers don't like them too long, (although this one is with nearly 2000 words. The last part only has 1000 words.) Bob, I want to thank you sincerely for your kindness in your reviews. Whenever you have come on, you've always been so nice. So, thank you! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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It's a pleasure to read your work, Sandra. :) Bob
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"If you seen" should probably be "if you saw" or "if you see". Makes you wonder what exactly has happened to "Mildred"? Enough of an ending to make readers come back to find out.
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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"If you seen" should probably be "if you saw" or "if you see". Makes you wonder what exactly has happened to "Mildred"? Enough of an ending to make readers come back to find out.
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thank you so much, Brett, for your helpful review. I'll be posting the last chapter of the book on Tuesday, then all will be revealed. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
Gee. The thought of Mildred being is almost unthinkable Sandra, but the heart attack has slowed her down dramatically, I remember when our last dog died, his heart simply gave out, he previously couldn't walk very few without getting tired. James is wondering if Verinica will make more "trips" but she isn't sure. Will we meet the masters of travel? Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Gee. The thought of Mildred being is almost unthinkable Sandra, but the heart attack has slowed her down dramatically, I remember when our last dog died, his heart simply gave out, he previously couldn't walk very few without getting tired. James is wondering if Verinica will make more "trips" but she isn't sure. Will we meet the masters of travel? Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Yes, Mildred isn't a spring chicken any more and a heart attack isn't something to be taken lightly at any age. Everything will become clear on Tuesday, when I post the final chapter in this book. It will lead on to the third book in the trilogy. Thank you, my dear friend. I'm so sorry about your dog, they are as much family as our human family and we love and miss them just the same. Big hugs dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
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He was probably our most loved dog, he adored our little grandaughter, hollowed her everywhere, she was three then, she still misses him, she's six now.. Bless you Sandra,
Comment from apky
I so very much hope that nothing has happened to Mildred? As usual you chose the most "frustrating" spot to finish a chapter - good for the reader if this is the book in the reader's hand; tortuous for a FanStory reader who can't simply turn the page and read on.
Otherwise, excellent in every way, Sandra.
If she carrys(carries) on like this, I'll have her back in hospital to run some more tests.'
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reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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I so very much hope that nothing has happened to Mildred? As usual you chose the most "frustrating" spot to finish a chapter - good for the reader if this is the book in the reader's hand; tortuous for a FanStory reader who can't simply turn the page and read on.
Otherwise, excellent in every way, Sandra.
If she carrys(carries) on like this, I'll have her back in hospital to run some more tests.'
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Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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All will be revealed on Tuesday, Aki, the very last page of the book. I won't keep you waiting a week this time. :) Thank you so much, my friend, for your wonderful review and for spotting that error. I've corrected it now. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is not good. You have been hinting that Mildred wasn't doing well and I didn't want to believe it. I guess I had better believe it. I don't like it. You have done another wonderful job of writing.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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This is not good. You have been hinting that Mildred wasn't doing well and I didn't want to believe it. I guess I had better believe it. I don't like it. You have done another wonderful job of writing.
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Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Oh, dear, Barb, it doesn't look good, does it? The final part is on Tuesday, pop in and see what happens. :)) Thank you so much for another lovely review. You are the first one, I think I'll be in for a tongue lashing with this one! lol. Big hugs, my friend, and thank you. :)) Sandra xxx
