Hanging Wallpaper
Painting a picture in words.9 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
I like this humorous approach. It should go over well in the contest, and best of luck. I can see where a one-armed paper hanger might have a problem. (I think that should be one-armed.) He probably would leave a mess. Great artwork to illustrate the point of your poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is right-on. Great job. judi
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
I like this humorous approach. It should go over well in the contest, and best of luck. I can see where a one-armed paper hanger might have a problem. (I think that should be one-armed.) He probably would leave a mess. Great artwork to illustrate the point of your poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is right-on. Great job. judi
Comment Written 14-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Judi.
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You're welcome. Hope you're enjoying your new place. judi
Comment from Realist101
Oh dear! I tried it one time. NEVER again. I had to have someone else do it. I can paint. But not hang paper. I hope this is just a poem and you didn't do like I did? But cute post and I like the art with it too! Best of luck Pat, this is a good one. Susan
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
Oh dear! I tried it one time. NEVER again. I had to have someone else do it. I can paint. But not hang paper. I hope this is just a poem and you didn't do like I did? But cute post and I like the art with it too! Best of luck Pat, this is a good one. Susan
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Susan.
Comment from Joan E.
You were definitely inspired by the picture you shared with us! I have hug wallpaper and it takes at least two arms!! You certainly described the activity well in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
You were definitely inspired by the picture you shared with us! I have hug wallpaper and it takes at least two arms!! You certainly described the activity well in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Joan.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written 5-7-5 about the one arm wall paper hanger. You used very good words and the art work went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
Patricia, This is a very well written 5-7-5 about the one arm wall paper hanger. You used very good words and the art work went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Teri.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Lol!
I used to love wallpapering. I think every house we owned had at least one room, or a wall done.
Don't think I will be doing that here. No energy, bad knees and wallpaper is out of style.
Thanks for the giggles.
patty
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
Lol!
I used to love wallpapering. I think every house we owned had at least one room, or a wall done.
Don't think I will be doing that here. No energy, bad knees and wallpaper is out of style.
Thanks for the giggles.
patty
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Patty.
Comment from Sasha
I don't think I could do it with three arms. My mother loved to put up wall paper and always did a great job too. Nice work with this one. Clever, well written, and fantastic illustration to go with it. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
I don't think I could do it with three arms. My mother loved to put up wall paper and always did a great job too. Nice work with this one. Clever, well written, and fantastic illustration to go with it. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 15-May-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Sasha.
Comment from Mistydawn
Lol this reminds me of an episode of I Love Lucy Her and Ethel was hanging wallpaper in the bedroom. Covered the walls, doors, and window, lol. Love your artwork fits perfectly with your poem and the poem was a fun little read.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
Lol this reminds me of an episode of I Love Lucy Her and Ethel was hanging wallpaper in the bedroom. Covered the walls, doors, and window, lol. Love your artwork fits perfectly with your poem and the poem was a fun little read.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your nice review, Misty.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. So glad I don't have that job! I couldn't do it even when using both arms. But I make a mess just painting walls. Hope all is going well with settling in to your new place, Patricia. Hugs!
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
Lol. So glad I don't have that job! I couldn't do it even when using both arms. But I make a mess just painting walls. Hope all is going well with settling in to your new place, Patricia. Hugs!
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your nice review, Helen.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Patchelaw,
Nice poem and imagery. Shouldn't this line be "really mades a mess" be "really makes a mess"? Otherwise, it's a nice message. You did paint a picture with your words in this poem. I love you title. When I paint, and I do, it's always a mess?
Thanks.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
Hello Patchelaw,
Nice poem and imagery. Shouldn't this line be "really mades a mess" be "really makes a mess"? Otherwise, it's a nice message. You did paint a picture with your words in this poem. I love you title. When I paint, and I do, it's always a mess?
Thanks.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks for your nice review, Joyce.
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You are welcome. Have a blessed day.