Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Wonderful use of the alliterative 'w.' I found the poem moved with a rhythm of its own as the descriptive language fell all around me. Great artwork to compliment the piece.

~patty~

 Comment Written 10-May-2018

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reply by the author on 10-May-2018

Thanks Patty, this was kind of experimental. So glad it worked; I really appreciate your comments.

Blessings,
Brother Badger

Comment from Ava Wilson

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this aloud. I especially liked your use of alliteration throughout the entire poem. Great job on this in my opinion!

 Comment Written 10-May-2018

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reply by the author on 10-May-2018

Thanks Ava, I really appreciate your feedback and review.
Blessings, Brother Badger