A son's dream
The day I was born45 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You are one very fortunate man Steve. Yes there'll never be anyone like your mum, cherish her while you've got her, it won't be forever, my mum's long gone, along with dad, I have siblings left of course, but no mum. Beautifully written, articulate and smooth, the language was rich in gratitude to both mum and God, smoothly scribed in slightly varying meter, and aabb quatrains, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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You are one very fortunate man Steve. Yes there'll never be anyone like your mum, cherish her while you've got her, it won't be forever, my mum's long gone, along with dad, I have siblings left of course, but no mum. Beautifully written, articulate and smooth, the language was rich in gratitude to both mum and God, smoothly scribed in slightly varying meter, and aabb quatrains, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Roy, thank you for this most excellent review my friend. I hope to have her for as long as possible. Can't imagine life without her.
God bless
Steve
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No of course not.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I can only imagine how proud your mother must be! This is a wonderful tribute to her and how much you appreciate her love. I teared up when I read about her singing to you. My mother used to sing and I miss her voice. :( This is a great contest entry. Good luck to you and Happy Mother's Day to a wonderful mom and her loving child.
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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I can only imagine how proud your mother must be! This is a wonderful tribute to her and how much you appreciate her love. I teared up when I read about her singing to you. My mother used to sing and I miss her voice. :( This is a great contest entry. Good luck to you and Happy Mother's Day to a wonderful mom and her loving child.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Thank you Cindy for this most exceptional six star review. I am proud to call her Mom and know she will cherish this piece greatly.
God bless
Steve
Comment from poetwatch
Neonewman this is a beautiful poem and a tribute to your mother. You are your mother son for I see a beautiful soul that can hold a pen and create exquisite art, a masterpiece in writing. Thank you my friend for sharing your love of the word. This is a good entry for the Mother's Day Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Neonewman this is a beautiful poem and a tribute to your mother. You are your mother son for I see a beautiful soul that can hold a pen and create exquisite art, a masterpiece in writing. Thank you my friend for sharing your love of the word. This is a good entry for the Mother's Day Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Wow,
Thank you for this beautiful review poetwatch. Being compared to her is such an honor.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how gracious the son finds even today her mother keeps the place, like every day, he thinks today on Mother's Day, none that could ever take the place of his precious mother; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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This speaks how gracious the son finds even today her mother keeps the place, like every day, he thinks today on Mother's Day, none that could ever take the place of his precious mother; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Thank you DR ALCREATOR for this excellent review. Every day like mother's day! I love that.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent entry for the Mother's Day Poetry Contest. This poet gives beautiful words to us that described in excellent rhythm and rhyme the love and devotion he has had since birth for his mother. His vision is clear for all to see and there is no ambiguity. Those selected words flow so smoothly they provide a melody to his love he shows to the world. Well Done.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the Mother's Day Poetry Contest. This poet gives beautiful words to us that described in excellent rhythm and rhyme the love and devotion he has had since birth for his mother. His vision is clear for all to see and there is no ambiguity. Those selected words flow so smoothly they provide a melody to his love he shows to the world. Well Done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Thank you Henry for this wonderful review my friend. I love my mother dearly and can't imagine life without her.
God bless
Steve
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you are welcome
