Morning Song
Cinquain: Embrace the newness! 3rd Place Winner15 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this is a feel good poem! After a hard day's work, it is refreshing reading this poem, which was well-written.
In its brevity, I love the imagery (both auditory and visually).
Thank you for brightening my night.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Wow, this is a feel good poem! After a hard day's work, it is refreshing reading this poem, which was well-written.
In its brevity, I love the imagery (both auditory and visually).
Thank you for brightening my night.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Hello Poetic Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Were you able to copy and paste the clip of the Song Sparrow singing in my Author's Notes? Its song truly is uplifting. And they usually sing in groups...outside our bedroom windows!
Thank you for your complimentary review!
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent verse for the CinQuain Poetry Prompt. I love the springtime theme and like how you developed the verse by contrasting it to winter. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Excellent verse for the CinQuain Poetry Prompt. I love the springtime theme and like how you developed the verse by contrasting it to winter. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed!
I am just so thankful Spring has finally arrived. She certainly took her time this year!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a pretty photo of the singing sparrow and the flowers! Love the beginning word "banish" and then the ending "awake!" A well-written cinquain poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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What a pretty photo of the singing sparrow and the flowers! Love the beginning word "banish" and then the ending "awake!" A well-written cinquain poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Hello Cindy!
So pleased you enjoyed!
I am so glad Spring has arrived...finally!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks spring's promise naturally as it appears beckons, banishing winter's bleak days, now embrace the song - awake, the song of the sparrow's sweet call; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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This speaks spring's promise naturally as it appears beckons, banishing winter's bleak days, now embrace the song - awake, the song of the sparrow's sweet call; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 10-May-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
Comment from Ava Wilson
I love how your poem made me feel welcomed into spring. I think you did an excellent job and I wish you the best of luck!
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reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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I love how your poem made me feel welcomed into spring. I think you did an excellent job and I wish you the best of luck!
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Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Hello Ava!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
