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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Good God-I don't know where you find your pictures but I love this one. Gave me a good life and the poem was a perfect match. Loved it.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 11-May-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from nomi338
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You took it all in, but how much did you retain? A sponge can absorb a tremendous amount of liquid, but under the pressure of being squeezed, that liquid is going to come out. Therefore a plan has to be devised to hold onto what has been taken in.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    It?s called, write it down.
Comment from lyenochka
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So true. And now I think my brain is more like a sieve! Wish we could take it all in but use it for better purposes than when we were kids! Thanks for the fun memory.

 Comment Written 09-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you, lyenochka
Comment from Ginnygray
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How true is this poem! The teacher that can motivate and inspire a student to want to learn is a teacher that can make a difference in a studen'ts life! Enjoyed!

 Comment Written 09-May-2018


reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thanks, Ginny
Comment from judiverse
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That is so true. The kiddos don't question what they hear but take it all in. Give them a few years, and they question everything. Hurrah for the sponge brains. What a great picture. Such a solemn expression on the kids' faces. Right on syllable count of 5-7-5. judi

 Comment Written 09-May-2018


reply by the author on 09-May-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 09-May-2018
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL, love that picture, it goes so well with you poem. Yes, our brains were like sponges when we were young, but like the sponge when overused it falls apart! lol, that's what happened to mine. Good one, my friend. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-May-2018


reply by the author on 09-May-2018
    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about kid brains, when they were younger; their kid brains were like sponges to carry or taking everything or all in it; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-May-2018


reply by the author on 09-May-2018
    Thanks, ALD