A poem about Jesus.
Written for the club.15 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the fact that Jesus died for us but the poet does not know the exact reason why but poet believes God knows; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
This speaks the fact that Jesus died for us but the poet does not know the exact reason why but poet believes God knows; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, it is a lovely picture you've chosen to accompany your poem which I found well written. It is also open to interpretation which is a good poetic ploy for adding interest. I saw no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Hello, it is a lovely picture you've chosen to accompany your poem which I found well written. It is also open to interpretation which is a good poetic ploy for adding interest. I saw no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
Comment from royowen
Jesus certainly came to die for us Ine. He wore the garment of fragile flesh, purely for the purpose of our salvation, kind dying for kind, which was us. Well done dear girl, an excellent short form poem, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Jesus certainly came to die for us Ine. He wore the garment of fragile flesh, purely for the purpose of our salvation, kind dying for kind, which was us. Well done dear girl, an excellent short form poem, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
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Comment from patcelaw
Ine, this is a lovely post for the club event. Many blessings for a wonderful and blessed week. I am moved and now can review. Patricia
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
Ine, this is a lovely post for the club event. Many blessings for a wonderful and blessed week. I am moved and now can review. Patricia
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed week.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written shout out poem. God sent His Son to the world to prove His love for us. His sion died for us to give us a chance to repent and Jesus becomes the mediator between us and God.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2018
A very well-written shout out poem. God sent His Son to the world to prove His love for us. His sion died for us to give us a chance to repent and Jesus becomes the mediator between us and God.
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Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.