Stories of the Dreamtime
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Sky Dancer"Aboriginal myths and legends.
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You create very powerful imagery. The setting helps to create your characters. The characters remain consistent to their roles. You handled the dialogues well. There is never a question as to who is speaking. You reflect the culture well. The actions of the characters have good follow-through. Yoi have captured the sense of myth in this story. This has a very nice ending or beginning. Well written
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reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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You create very powerful imagery. The setting helps to create your characters. The characters remain consistent to their roles. You handled the dialogues well. There is never a question as to who is speaking. You reflect the culture well. The actions of the characters have good follow-through. Yoi have captured the sense of myth in this story. This has a very nice ending or beginning. Well written
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Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hello Liz, Thanks so much for reading,, glad you enjoyed the story. Cheers, Kay XX
Comment from Sasha
This is a wonderful and fascinating story. I love it when you tell stories of the dreamtime. Excellent work with this with strong imagery and, as I said, a fascinating story. I have missed you and hope all is well. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
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This is a wonderful and fascinating story. I love it when you tell stories of the dreamtime. Excellent work with this with strong imagery and, as I said, a fascinating story. I have missed you and hope all is well. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
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Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Hello Sasha, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. I haven't written any chapters, just poetry. Love, K.
Comment from jlsavell
Kace,
Dearest friend!!
I adore your stories! I think you are better at short stories than poetry and you are excellent at poetry! Write more. Your imagination soars and the way you set the imagery and the scene, as well as producing the why of a legend is skillfully done.
love it sweet friend
Jimi
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Kace,
Dearest friend!!
I adore your stories! I think you are better at short stories than poetry and you are excellent at poetry! Write more. Your imagination soars and the way you set the imagery and the scene, as well as producing the why of a legend is skillfully done.
love it sweet friend
Jimi
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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G'day Jiminy Cricket, Thanks so much for dropping in, glad you enjoyed my friend. Love, Kace.
