Robin warbles
Bye bye blackbird 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I don't think I can offer any suggestions that would make this five - seven - five better. You have followed the prompt guidelines and I would say you have a good entry for this contest. So, best wishes.
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I don't think I can offer any suggestions that would make this five - seven - five better. You have followed the prompt guidelines and I would say you have a good entry for this contest. So, best wishes.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
Comment from meeshu
interesting spin, I like it. we have lots of Robins in our backyard. they don't warble so much but they do eat a lot of apples. good luck in the contest.
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interesting spin, I like it. we have lots of Robins in our backyard. they don't warble so much but they do eat a lot of apples. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Robin Warbles, has the right set up and shows us the tiniest robin, already chirping out the magnificence of the day. Nice.
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This 5-7-5, Robin Warbles, has the right set up and shows us the tiniest robin, already chirping out the magnificence of the day. Nice.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
