Bringing peace and love
The dove of peace11 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a pretty little poem. This is a great response to the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt on bye bye blackbird. I liked your choice of the peaceful, loving dove. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
What a pretty little poem. This is a great response to the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt on bye bye blackbird. I liked your choice of the peaceful, loving dove. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 08-May-2018
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Many thanks Cindy
Comment from Liberty Justice
Ooh WOW! What a powerful and beautiful photo. Wouldn't it be magical, if this dove and all doves could bring peace to troubled and countries at war. I love your statement about "bringing love and peace." WELL WRITTEN. your poet friend, liberty justice
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
Ooh WOW! What a powerful and beautiful photo. Wouldn't it be magical, if this dove and all doves could bring peace to troubled and countries at war. I love your statement about "bringing love and peace." WELL WRITTEN. your poet friend, liberty justice
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend for your kind comments.
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After the contest ends, type your name in on replies so I will know who you are. You got my thumbs up! GOOD LUCK! liberty justice
Comment from karenina
I predict this will be in the top three of the contest votes! Now if we could only make peace really happen before our prez of the orange hair messs with the Iran treaty without a plan B! (Just
sayin......)
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
I predict this will be in the top three of the contest votes! Now if we could only make peace really happen before our prez of the orange hair messs with the Iran treaty without a plan B! (Just
sayin......)
Karenina
Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
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Thanks for reading and commenting but sorry I don't understand what you've written.
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So much for reviewing on my Kindle. Sorry. I corrected the auto corrections....
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I wish. X
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird Poetry' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of the beautiful dove.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird Poetry' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of the beautiful dove.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from royowen
Of course the dove is represented by the twig brought back from dry land by the dove in Noah, and the Holy Spirit descending on Jesus at His baptism, well done, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
Of course the dove is represented by the twig brought back from dry land by the dove in Noah, and the Holy Spirit descending on Jesus at His baptism, well done, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks
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Welcome
Comment from Harry Smith
This is a beautifully written poem that has the prefect picture to accompany and it is filled with lots and lots of imagery and emotions as well.
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
This is a beautifully written poem that has the prefect picture to accompany and it is filled with lots and lots of imagery and emotions as well.
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 Bye Bye blackbird you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
This is a very well written 5-7-5 Bye Bye blackbird you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The dove of peace is a symbol to us and your poem is a joy to read, I wish you luck with the contest, few words for world peace, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
The dove of peace is a symbol to us and your poem is a joy to read, I wish you luck with the contest, few words for world peace, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks Dolly
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the poet imagines, as if, the white dove, from the sky, came flying on the earth, carries peace and love; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
This speaks the poet imagines, as if, the white dove, from the sky, came flying on the earth, carries peace and love; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Elizabeth Joanne
Such a calm and beautiful use of words. Perfect syllable count and a wonderful picture choice. Overall, this is a great piece. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 06-May-2018
Such a calm and beautiful use of words. Perfect syllable count and a wonderful picture choice. Overall, this is a great piece. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Many thanks for your great review.