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Bringing peace and love

The dove of peace

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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a pretty little poem. This is a great response to the 5-7-5 haiku writing prompt on bye bye blackbird. I liked your choice of the peaceful, loving dove. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2018


reply by the author on 08-May-2018
    Many thanks Cindy
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Ooh WOW! What a powerful and beautiful photo. Wouldn't it be magical, if this dove and all doves could bring peace to troubled and countries at war. I love your statement about "bringing love and peace." WELL WRITTEN. your poet friend, liberty justice

 Comment Written 07-May-2018


reply by the author on 07-May-2018
    Thank you so much, my friend for your kind comments.
reply by Liberty Justice on 07-May-2018
    After the contest ends, type your name in on replies so I will know who you are. You got my thumbs up! GOOD LUCK! liberty justice
Comment from karenina
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I predict this will be in the top three of the contest votes! Now if we could only make peace really happen before our prez of the orange hair messs with the Iran treaty without a plan B! (Just
sayin......)

Karenina

 Comment Written 07-May-2018


reply by the author on 07-May-2018
    Thanks for reading and commenting but sorry I don't understand what you've written.
reply by karenina on 07-May-2018
    So much for reviewing on my Kindle. Sorry. I corrected the auto corrections....
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
    I wish. X
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird Poetry' writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of the beautiful dove.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from royowen
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Of course the dove is represented by the twig brought back from dry land by the dove in Noah, and the Holy Spirit descending on Jesus at His baptism, well done, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks
reply by royowen on 06-May-2018
    Welcome
Comment from Harry Smith
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This is a beautifully written poem that has the prefect picture to accompany and it is filled with lots and lots of imagery and emotions as well.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 Bye Bye blackbird you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good words and lovely art work to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The dove of peace is a symbol to us and your poem is a joy to read, I wish you luck with the contest, few words for world peace, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks Dolly
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the poet imagines, as if, the white dove, from the sky, came flying on the earth, carries peace and love; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Elizabeth Joanne
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Such a calm and beautiful use of words. Perfect syllable count and a wonderful picture choice. Overall, this is a great piece. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-May-2018


reply by the author on 06-May-2018
    Many thanks for your great review.