Comment from damommy

Exceptional

How exciting for Francis to meet Jacob. I'm eager to see what he's like.

Francis was so fortunate that Joe and Rosie came along. What wonderful people!

 Comment Written 12-May-2018

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reply by the author on 13-May-2018

Thank you so much for another 6 stars, my wonderful friend. You will discover why Francis was so important that he had to be saved from Sir John, in the next part. More big hugs coming your way!! :) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, :)

I haven't read this in so long; I truly missed it. I was turned down for a seal and was a bit depressed with all the time I put into Flower, but the committee was right. I'm back to edit and re-edit.

I don't see any errors. I can't wait for the next.

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Oh, I'm so sorry! Flower is a truly wonderful story. But, when they turn you down for a seal, they do give you a good reason. I had a seal for my Hedgerow Capers, book for children, and it was taken up with a publisher. The second book in the series they the committee turned me down and gave me an excellent review on what they thought needed improving. I took their advice and got the next taken. So, although I haven't gone for another seal, they are worth it if you want to get a publisher. I am sure you will, because the series is superb and a wonderful way to teach children. So, buck up and sort it out and get a publisher!!! Thanks for reading mine, by the way! LOL. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by Rasmine on 08-May-2018

TY, :) Congrats! :P

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Good vernacular. Interesting dialogue and good story progression add another dimension to this well crafted tale. Seems more interest is in "Jacob" which could lead to more conflict with "Joe".

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thank you, Brett. The next part answers many questions, taking us up to the last two parts of this book! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

your gift for storytelling is so refreshing and fun to read, Sandra. your dialogue and use of vernacular is what really sets the story apart....meeshu

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

What a lovely thing to say, thank you so much, Meeshu! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Another good chapter to your story.
Your style makes it easy to keep up with all of the switching and moving about.
Well done and thank you for sharing this.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thank you so much, Sharon, I really appreciate your lovely review. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra. xxx

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

Another excellent chapter, Sandra. I'm glad the powers that be let Veronica see the result of her efforts, although I'm a bit concerned about Jowell's remark concerning Mildred. Yikes, you'll have a lynch mob after you if anything happens to her!
I can't wait to read on.

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

LOL! I've already been threatened with a picket line if anything happens to her! Thank you so much, Alexis for this lovely, (funny) review, and all those shiny stars. I really appreciate it. Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I've always been a fan of time travel in general, however imaginary or not, but it fun to think about, and you make it more fun than ever. Thanks for sharing another fun and entertaining chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thank you for another lovely review, Ric. I'm delighted you are still enjoying it! Big hugs, my friend. :) xxx Sandra

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

"Your eyes traveled past him...' I really like that as an ending. Hello Sandra, such good writing in this chapter of your book, 'This time - That time'. You are very good at descriptions: '... sun sending rays onto some of the leaves making them sparkle.'

I also find your dialogue so interesting with the accents clearly audible. And you salt your descriptions throughout, little bits at a time. It adds so much as you see the characters unfold slowly, rather than being told about them in a big chunk. Your plot is coming along and I saw nothing to change.

Thanks Sandra, have a great day, Ana.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thank you so much, Ana, for reading this part. I'm glad you enjoy the dialogue and the characters. Have a wonderful Sunday, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Great chapter Sandra. It's nice to hear how their lives have turned out. It doesn't sound as if any of them are missing Sir John!

One small correction:

I turned my attention back to the young man in front of me, no longer the lad of ten, and wondered how many years had past (passed) since I last saw him.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thank you so very much, Sue, for this lovely, helpful review and all the golden stars!! Only three left and then the big edit! Thank you for the correction, my friend, I've put it right. Big hugs! Sandra xxxx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, wow, this is a wonderful chapter. So Veronica has yet again been sent back in time, but this time to Bristol to see how Joe and his family have been doing, and also to see Francis and how he has developed. It's wonderful that we get know how everything has panned out. I'm worried about Mildred though. Hugs from a cool Cape Cod. I'm having a wonderful time with my family. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thank you so very much, Ulla, for another of your wonderful reviews and the 6 shiny stars! You are always so kind!

I'm so pleased you are having a lovely time with your family. It's a heat wave here, so perhaps we are having it better that you in Cape Cod! Enjoy yourself! Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxxxx