Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very nicely written loop poem. Each end line carries your motif forward with a successive thought.

A beautiful and haunting situation is created which pairs perfectly with a fine artwork choice.

Best wishes to you in the contest. :)

gloria

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 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks Gloria. I appreciate your great review.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Sugarray, a great entry for the Loop poem contest. It is nicely rhymed to unfold a scene that only the Bayou holds. It is a descriptive piece and quite eerie in its mood. Great picture to bring it over the finish line. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD

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 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks DD. I liked your entry too. I had originally thought to title it ?Bayou Shadows?, but saw you had used the word shadows too. Good luck on yours too!