Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is beautiful and I like the phrase "nature brings us the divine." All we need to do as you've stated so eloquently is to look around. We can see the Masters handywork everywhere. I enjoyed reading this well written little poem. Well done Mermaids!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying my poem. I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks poet loves big daffodils and he enjoys a warm day, daffodils bloom anew every day and he changes every day afresh, he enjoys change in seasons and enjoys Nature that brings beauty in divine; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

Yes, I love daffodils and they are such an inspiration for poetry. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Mermaids, this is a gorgeous poem and the picture suits it to perfection. I think your careful word choices create lovely imagery and nothing jarred about your poem, which I found a pleasure to read and review, cheers, Ana.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

I am honored by your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from fm wright

Excellent

What a beautiful way of reminding us that we do change and become new every day. It didn't hurt that you chose daffodils as they are my favorite flower. Enjoyed the share.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Smile mermaids
Such a sunny and happy poem to read, love how you used your rhyming words to me it gave me merry feeling
TY for sharing
Gert

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

Thanks for a wonderful review. Elaine

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

I adore how good poetry creates that feel-good reaction with the reader. I love the nature theme here as the use of "divine" use of change implies that unseen beauty within human nature. Beautiful

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I like your cute and sunny little verse.
Nicely rhymed, well written. It tells a good story of nature's changes and flowers.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks for taking time to read and enjoy. Elaine

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

I like this piece because its relatable to everything and everyone as changes happen everywhere everyday, written amazingly and has a nice flow.********************************************

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

daffodils bloom anew
I change too
like the seasons in time
nature brings us the divine

Beautiful beautiful I love the flowers
God bless

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful flower and presentation, Elaine.
-I like how you have two poems in one
with their own rhymes.
-The message in each is excellent.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Jun-2018

You are welcome, Elaine.