a cold hearted vein
a cold hearted heart6 total reviews
Comment from Zainab1
This poem expresses a good idea but continuous repetition of words has lost its charm.Poetry must be touchy not only theme wise but apprently(structure and choice of words) as well.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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This poem expresses a good idea but continuous repetition of words has lost its charm.Poetry must be touchy not only theme wise but apprently(structure and choice of words) as well.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,zainab1! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from W G Griffiths
The artwork is very cool and the poem as a whole appears to have taken lots of planning. It's perhaps very deep and I couldn't reach those depths on the first read so I read it again. Same result. Must be me.
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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The artwork is very cool and the poem as a whole appears to have taken lots of planning. It's perhaps very deep and I couldn't reach those depths on the first read so I read it again. Same result. Must be me.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,w g griffiths! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Swampfox1
Way too much repetition for it to be effective, at least in my opinion. To me, it is much too repetitious. I started to give you three stars and thought that would be wrong just because I dislike your nomenclature. The repetitive use of blood, and blooding, makes you sound like a killer. You must be from a foreign land for I see grammatical mistakes in your notes. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Way too much repetition for it to be effective, at least in my opinion. To me, it is much too repetitious. I started to give you three stars and thought that would be wrong just because I dislike your nomenclature. The repetitive use of blood, and blooding, makes you sound like a killer. You must be from a foreign land for I see grammatical mistakes in your notes. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,swampfox1! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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You have the wrong definition and the wrong word, I have searched every place I could think of, it is supposed to be spelled vain. You have a misconception, wow, and a misspelled word with a misuse of a word.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about cold and cold status of a heart, this is something we do not find but we can only perceive and realize if we care to; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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This speaks about cold and cold status of a heart, this is something we do not find but we can only perceive and realize if we care to; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from apky
Well, all the reader can say is that your poem is indeed unique.
You have your own way with words and arrangements, and that's art too, right?
express is expressing a cold blooded expression
a cold hearted expression is a cold hearted vein
a cold hearted expression is a cold hearted heart
cold hearted is cold hearted
a cold blooded vein is a cold blooding vein
a heart is a cold hearted heart
a heart is a cold hearted hearted
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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Well, all the reader can say is that your poem is indeed unique.
You have your own way with words and arrangements, and that's art too, right?
express is expressing a cold blooded expression
a cold hearted expression is a cold hearted vein
a cold hearted expression is a cold hearted heart
cold hearted is cold hearted
a cold blooded vein is a cold blooding vein
a heart is a cold hearted heart
a heart is a cold hearted hearted
Comment Written 10-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thanks for the time of day for your review,apky! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Artasylum
This is so unique. seriously compelling and intellectual. Each line required thought to understand the differences. So, great job and happy to have read your interesting write. yours, diana
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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This is so unique. seriously compelling and intellectual. Each line required thought to understand the differences. So, great job and happy to have read your interesting write. yours, diana
Comment Written 09-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-May-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review, diana! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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cool... your name could be yin and yang and it would mean the same.
