Sentimental
A Pleiades entry3 total reviews
Comment from Miriam Collins
Very lovely poem! I love the sweet memories that are reminisced throughout the lines. My favorite part is, "sneaking up on sleeping frogs" I think it is a very descriptive visual you created. Very nice!
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
Very lovely poem! I love the sweet memories that are reminisced throughout the lines. My favorite part is, "sneaking up on sleeping frogs" I think it is a very descriptive visual you created. Very nice!
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Thank you for the positive feedback!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the most sentimental childhood days in and around Nature and boating, roaming, walking, playing and those colourful days in Nana's yard; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
This speaks the most sentimental childhood days in and around Nature and boating, roaming, walking, playing and those colourful days in Nana's yard; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your positive feedback.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a well written entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of childhood is well written in your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
I think this is a well written entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt.
Your story of childhood is well written in your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your positive feedback.