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Last vestige of respect for press down the tubes.24 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
I saw some of that news report, and I'd have to agree, that woman went too far - after all, the office deserves respect, if not the man in it, and far be it from me to ascertain or judge anyway. But your poem rocks!
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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I saw some of that news report, and I'd have to agree, that woman went too far - after all, the office deserves respect, if not the man in it, and far be it from me to ascertain or judge anyway. But your poem rocks!
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Thsnkd gor reviewing. I agree. One can dislike him but not rsin doen on either the office or others sssociated with it
Comment from judiverse
That was a pretty sorry affair. Attempts at comedy definitely backfired. Some did walk out, but the targets of the so-called jokes (Sarah Sanders and KelleyAnne Conway) stuck it out. They were very gracious. You are right on your 20-syllable count. The media mistakenly think they are the only ones who know anything. Excellent subject. judi
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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That was a pretty sorry affair. Attempts at comedy definitely backfired. Some did walk out, but the targets of the so-called jokes (Sarah Sanders and KelleyAnne Conway) stuck it out. They were very gracious. You are right on your 20-syllable count. The media mistakenly think they are the only ones who know anything. Excellent subject. judi
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Thanks for reviewing.
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Hi, Dallas, and you are very welcome. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
Without the literal meaning, this piece could be interpreted in a lot of ways, I liked the word play and the verbiage, it's a good piece of art. Good words make good work.
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Without the literal meaning, this piece could be interpreted in a lot of ways, I liked the word play and the verbiage, it's a good piece of art. Good words make good work.
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Thanks for reviewing
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a true moral feeling and sentiment with a clear and strong expression of concern about the attitude and behaviour at press dinner; politics and civility in question; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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This speaks a true moral feeling and sentiment with a clear and strong expression of concern about the attitude and behaviour at press dinner; politics and civility in question; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Swampfox1
Your notes tell most of the story, the poem actually keeps it hidden and talks about it under cloak. The same with the photo, nothing disclosed all hidden and kept secret, maybe that is the entire problem.
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Your notes tell most of the story, the poem actually keeps it hidden and talks about it under cloak. The same with the photo, nothing disclosed all hidden and kept secret, maybe that is the entire problem.
Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Yes, since it was limited to only 20 syllables I felt the notes wewre necessary. Thanks for reviewing.
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True, they were necessary, but what I meant was reveal some reason as to what it is about in the poem itself, has to be a way, isn't there?
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Gotcha. I guess I didn't take into considerstion that others weren't as obsessed about it as I was. Or that they weren't even aware.
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What I was getting at is like what you said in your first reply that the poem was too short and not enough room so the notes were necessary, I agree, but try to write it as though notes were not available. That is what I meant.
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Understood..will give it a shot when I have time. Thanks. Will be a challenge.
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great. Have a great weekend
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Now in my portfolio under dump site.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write and left me feeling quite dirty and uncomfortable, which I expect is the intention, a genius write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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This is a clever write and left me feeling quite dirty and uncomfortable, which I expect is the intention, a genius write and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Thank you for the great review
Comment from The Death
Your poem is an excellent commentary on that event! Superb word economy and fine use of alliteration. Clever use of personification too. The last two lines are nicely penned and leave a deep impact.
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Your poem is an excellent commentary on that event! Superb word economy and fine use of alliteration. Clever use of personification too. The last two lines are nicely penned and leave a deep impact.
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from meeshu
that was an abomination, Dallas. used to be Liberals could engage in intelligent discourse. now the are Progressive without the ability to entertain anything outside their narrow minds. and they stopped being funny.......meeshu
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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that was an abomination, Dallas. used to be Liberals could engage in intelligent discourse. now the are Progressive without the ability to entertain anything outside their narrow minds. and they stopped being funny.......meeshu
Comment Written 02-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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It is unbelievable. They hsve morphed into something I don't even recognize. Thank you for the great review. Using an
Comment from Spitfire
While I don't know the story behind this post, the message is clear. Sewer and Decency make the setting and its characters clear. "Dressed in discomfort" says so much.
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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While I don't know the story behind this post, the message is clear. Sewer and Decency make the setting and its characters clear. "Dressed in discomfort" says so much.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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I put it in author notes. It was in response to the correspondence dinner.
Comment from nancyjam
Your brief poem addresses that embarrassing
dinner perfectly.
It was truly disgusting and your right. Those in attendance
should have walked out.
Strong words for the contest. I wish you luck.
Nancy
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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Your brief poem addresses that embarrassing
dinner perfectly.
It was truly disgusting and your right. Those in attendance
should have walked out.
Strong words for the contest. I wish you luck.
Nancy
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-May-2018
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amendment rights to justify such bad behavior is ludicrous. Thanks for reviewing.
