Comment from LaFrance

Excellent

For having a lot of F words your poem flowed quite well off my tongue, while I read it. Each line was important to your poem. Very quaint poem about a fairy.

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;

Thank you for sharing your Pleiades. I thought that every word in the poem had to start with the same letter; I could be wrong.

This poem is lovely. I don't like to think of fairies with broken hearts, but I imagine they get lovesick, just like the rest of us,

~patty~

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

an excellent Pleiades poem, Mer. it is fanciful and fun, what would we poets have to write about if their were no fairies? I love to see you experimenting with different forms.........meeshu

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful words and I am glad you enjoyed my fairy poem.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids such a nice Pleiades poem
I was always dazzled by poems about fairies
I have a question what who pierced the little fairy's soul.
Gert

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

Thanks. The world of humans pierced the fairy's soul. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-May-2018

Oh what a sad answer mermaids.
Gert

Comment from Lainee...

Excellent

Plelades poetry is not always easy to write and keep good flow to the verse. I like the way this has been written and the imagery takes the reader for a ride. Well done! Lainee

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Mermaids, this is a lovely Pleiades poem using the letter 'f' as the main thread to sew this adventuresome piece together. I enjoyed the unrestricted flow of imagination that only the fairies can bring out. Well done! ~DD

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thanks for your encouraging review and I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Elaine

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello Mermaids, I actually like this form, and I'm not a formalist liking poet, but this is lovely writing. Good imagery throughout and the poem has such a striking sense of forgiveness and oneness with self and others. I loved that.

Nicely done and thanks for being so generous with your talent, Ana.

 Comment Written 14-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from HaleyBel

Excellent

I enjoyed your little poem, the imagery was good. I liked the structure, and the descriptions are nice. I should have been a fairy, I take solace in the same things. (smile) I have not heard of a Pleiades poem before. Nice work.

 Comment Written 14-May-2018

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reply by the author on 14-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Elaine

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Pleiades Poem contest. The consonance of the F sound adds its, soft breath through tensed lips, sounds to make the poem fly with ease as it is vocalized. The words describe the fairy realm in its appropriate and vibrant forest colors. Well Done.

 Comment Written 10-May-2018

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reply by the author on 14-May-2018

Thanks for your encouraging and thoughtful review. Elaine

reply by Henry King on 14-May-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This is such a sweet and pretty Pleiades poem, my friend, I love: "flapping wings make a musical sound." I love any poetry or stories about fairies. I enjoyed this.
~Kerry

 Comment Written 10-May-2018

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reply by the author on 14-May-2018

I am glad you enjoyed my fairy poem. Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 16-May-2018

I did:)) you're welcome, Elaine.