Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is kind of a free-wheeling, free-association piece. You have achieved your rhyme and the flow is excellent. This seems to take a jab at the effort to rhyme at all costs. Rhyme gives us that pleasing sound that we like in a poem. The artwork goes along with the humorous approach. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 09-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.

reply by judiverse on 09-May-2018

You're very welcome. judi

reply by judiverse on 09-May-2018

You're welcome. Take care. juid

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poem writing prompt.
Your short verse is well rhymed and a lot of fun.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed second part of the week.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Well, Ine this is a great entry for the contest. You make it very clear that your poem has to rhyme and then you proceed to do just that. I hope you'll do well. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

This is really a great poem, Ine and a very good entry for the contest.
Good rhyme and I love your sense of humor. Well done girl and good luck in the contest. Fia

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Also many tanks for the lovely six.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

This is really a great poem, Ine and a very good entry for the contest.
Good rhyme and I love your sense of humor. Well done girl and good luck in the contest. Fia

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hey there Ine
Your poem is a superb entry for the rhyming poem and it is clever as well. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good flow of words. There is very good imagery.
Bear

 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I actually thought the illustration was a clever match, since it focused on a nursery rhyme that almost everyone knows. I enjoyed your sense of humor and your rhymes. Here's a "toast" to you and best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

This is an exceptionally well written poem that is filled with lots of imagery and also emotions. The reader enjoyed the read and wish good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Robina
Smiles I see you did great jokes about why rhyming to your to rhyme is not a must.
But here you showing us readers it's necessary for this rhyming contest.

Gert

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-May-2018

You are welcome Robina
Gert

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Rhyming is good
but not a must.
In the end,
My faith in my muse I trust.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making
for a very good read.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

reply by c_lucas on 06-May-2018

You're welcome, Ine.