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Choose Life

Decisions follow us through our lifetime.

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Comment from victor 66
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I would never argue with your philosophy concerning the birth of a child. There are so many things that aren't right with our world, this is a good place to start. Does your format follow the prompt rules? I've just never seen 1-6-1 poem as a single line. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
    Thanks I need to fix the format. I typed it on my Iphone that is probably why it shows as one line. Thanks for letting me know.
reply by victor 66 on 01-May-2018
    You are most welcome. I'm impressed you wrote it on your iPhone.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Your verse carries a strong pro-life message in only five words.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much for your kind review.