Skinny Dipping
5-7-5 Summer10 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
A very delightful five-seven-five entry you have here. There are so many aspects of summer, that if you can, all should be taken into account. I wish you well in the contest.
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A very delightful five-seven-five entry you have here. There are so many aspects of summer, that if you can, all should be taken into account. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
Comment from Miriam Collins
Very nice poem! You do a wonderful job of using descriptive words. My favorite line is the last, "summer nights enchant". Most the time summer poems are about the daytime, but I like how you chose to illustrate nighttime. I truly cant wait for cool summer nights!
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Very nice poem! You do a wonderful job of using descriptive words. My favorite line is the last, "summer nights enchant". Most the time summer poems are about the daytime, but I like how you chose to illustrate nighttime. I truly cant wait for cool summer nights!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Such moving and beautiful imagery. The black and white background and photograph enhance the feelings of the subject matter... Dreamy and sensual...
Just a note: No need for "nights'" to show possession as in this line nights is used as the subject of enchant... (Man! Those former English teachers are picky!) :)
diane
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Such moving and beautiful imagery. The black and white background and photograph enhance the feelings of the subject matter... Dreamy and sensual...
Just a note: No need for "nights'" to show possession as in this line nights is used as the subject of enchant... (Man! Those former English teachers are picky!) :)
diane
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Summer' writing prompt.
Your short verse is full of imagery.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Summer' writing prompt.
Your short verse is full of imagery.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from rspoet
There is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 contest
and the skinny dipping adds another element to it
Excellent use of alliteration of the "s" sounds
Hopefully, you run into any splinters to on the slide down
Excellent art work embeddment
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
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There is an excellent entry for the 5-7-5 contest
and the skinny dipping adds another element to it
Excellent use of alliteration of the "s" sounds
Hopefully, you run into any splinters to on the slide down
Excellent art work embeddment
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from Harry Smith
Outstanding presentation for this outstandingly written 5-7-5 that should do well in the contest. The poem is filled with lots and lots of imagery.
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Outstanding presentation for this outstandingly written 5-7-5 that should do well in the contest. The poem is filled with lots and lots of imagery.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from humpwhistle
I like the image of sliding down a crescent moon--very cinematic, the ultimate water park. I'm not sure the apostrophe is correctly placed in the last line--or if you need it all. Perhaps I'm misreading.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
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I like the image of sliding down a crescent moon--very cinematic, the ultimate water park. I'm not sure the apostrophe is correctly placed in the last line--or if you need it all. Perhaps I'm misreading.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from Old Soldier
Was looking for something about skinning dipping? Its nice I don't think the title and poem go together but it could just be me. Thanks.
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Was looking for something about skinning dipping? Its nice I don't think the title and poem go together but it could just be me. Thanks.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Wouldn't it be lovely if we could do that : -) This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Summer writing prompt contest. Simple in layout and beautiful in words and imagination. A wonderful contender for the competition. Good luck! ~DD
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Wouldn't it be lovely if we could do that : -) This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Summer writing prompt contest. Simple in layout and beautiful in words and imagination. A wonderful contender for the competition. Good luck! ~DD
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
Comment from karenina
So pretty! Words and image! I would not have a clue how to do this, which makes it even more enchanting. I live how visual art and poeyry marry together.....
Karenina
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So pretty! Words and image! I would not have a clue how to do this, which makes it even more enchanting. I live how visual art and poeyry marry together.....
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
