Katie at Ten
A triolet11 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A fine triolet and the superb artwork framed your fine piece. I got my eyes on you, blind as they are. I am a sight impaired writer. Artwork means a lot to me and is eye candy for those like me with low vision. It sets the stage for the crowing piece of the work.
Enjoy your sixer.
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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A fine triolet and the superb artwork framed your fine piece. I got my eyes on you, blind as they are. I am a sight impaired writer. Artwork means a lot to me and is eye candy for those like me with low vision. It sets the stage for the crowing piece of the work.
Enjoy your sixer.
Sal :+)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Sally :)
Thank you so much for the generous feedback and 6 star award for this triolet. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from closetpoetjester
Oooh so I have ALL this to look forward to haha
Sorry you got there first otherwise it would be ME doling out advice and that's NEVER good hahaha
Loved your take on the realities of being a parent to young hormone charged individuals in this day and age of absolutely "anything goes". BTW don't EVER type that into your computer as a Google search LMAO
The reiteration of the main annoy factor peppered through this poem is in direct line with your frustrations at living the nig...oops I mean dream. Yeah, dream.
Love your work lady!
Now, I'm gonna slap you and your daughter, big time...
with a sixer haha
Hugs P
xx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Oooh so I have ALL this to look forward to haha
Sorry you got there first otherwise it would be ME doling out advice and that's NEVER good hahaha
Loved your take on the realities of being a parent to young hormone charged individuals in this day and age of absolutely "anything goes". BTW don't EVER type that into your computer as a Google search LMAO
The reiteration of the main annoy factor peppered through this poem is in direct line with your frustrations at living the nig...oops I mean dream. Yeah, dream.
Love your work lady!
Now, I'm gonna slap you and your daughter, big time...
with a sixer haha
Hugs P
xx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi P,
Sorry I've been a long time in saying thank you for this 6* review!
You know I appreciated it ;)
Best wishes, Debs x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Never having a daughter, I missed that pleasure! lol. My mother went through it twice though, I never believed her when she told me I was a nightmare! Moi?? Just think though, when she is past her late teens, she will become your best friend. Something to look forward too. Well done, Debra, you've come of age, too. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Never having a daughter, I missed that pleasure! lol. My mother went through it twice though, I never believed her when she told me I was a nightmare! Moi?? Just think though, when she is past her late teens, she will become your best friend. Something to look forward too. Well done, Debra, you've come of age, too. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 28-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra :)
A belated "thank you" for your feedback from last April! I appreciated it (even though I didn't let you know at the time!)
Love Debra x
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You're welcome, Debra. What is she like now? Or shouldn't I ask??? LOL.
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She's delightful!
I actually couldn't be prouder :D xx
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
I wish I could say that I can't relate, but with three kids, I think I've seen my share. *smile* But I WILL give you a fab tip that someone gave me years ago, that helped keep my sanity. They told that it's EVERY OTHER YEAR.
If you stand strong about your rules and expectations, regardless of the tears and tantrums, they will finally understand. They get the strength to fight back about a year later. This knowledge helped me soo much - I can last through anything for a year, you know? I knew it had a end. *smile*
The poem was well-executed. One of the best triolets I've seen all week. Kudos!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Debra,
I wish I could say that I can't relate, but with three kids, I think I've seen my share. *smile* But I WILL give you a fab tip that someone gave me years ago, that helped keep my sanity. They told that it's EVERY OTHER YEAR.
If you stand strong about your rules and expectations, regardless of the tears and tantrums, they will finally understand. They get the strength to fight back about a year later. This knowledge helped me soo much - I can last through anything for a year, you know? I knew it had a end. *smile*
The poem was well-executed. One of the best triolets I've seen all week. Kudos!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Robyn :)
A belated "thank you" for your feedback from last April! I appreciated it (even though I didn't let you know at the time!)
Best wishes, Debra
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hahahahahha! You sound like me. So I get it! No worries!
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Thank you! ;)
Comment from frogbook
Wow, that's pretty early to start the raging hormones -hope you all live threw the adolescent years-haha. I am battling out my second time over raising 2 grandsons. A joy and a challenge well described in your triolet.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Wow, that's pretty early to start the raging hormones -hope you all live threw the adolescent years-haha. I am battling out my second time over raising 2 grandsons. A joy and a challenge well described in your triolet.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi :)
A belated "thank you" for your feedback from last April! I appreciated it (even though I didn't let you know at the time!)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Linda Engel
Oh Honey, I understand. My grand daughter is almost ten and we never know when the switch will be off or on. I keep telling my daughter to take a deep breath and remember what she was like at that age. Great poem and my prayers are with you. All you can do is love them and try to explain what is happening to their little bodies.
Very nice Triolet.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Oh Honey, I understand. My grand daughter is almost ten and we never know when the switch will be off or on. I keep telling my daughter to take a deep breath and remember what she was like at that age. Great poem and my prayers are with you. All you can do is love them and try to explain what is happening to their little bodies.
Very nice Triolet.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Linda :)
A belated "thank you" for your feedback from last April! I appreciated it (even though I didn't let you know at the time!)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Ginnygray
This triolet is absolutely spot on. Debra. You and I share the same challenges apparently. I have eight grandchildren, four girls and four boys and this poem has just described two of my girls and one of my young boys. The lines 1-4-7 are the same and lines 2-8 are the same. The end thyme is abaaabab. The structure is sound and the message is true and informative. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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This triolet is absolutely spot on. Debra. You and I share the same challenges apparently. I have eight grandchildren, four girls and four boys and this poem has just described two of my girls and one of my young boys. The lines 1-4-7 are the same and lines 2-8 are the same. The end thyme is abaaabab. The structure is sound and the message is true and informative. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Ginny :)
A belated "thank you" for your feedback from last April! I appreciated it (even though I didn't let you know at the time!)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can relate to this and it will soon pass! Love your Triolet, very clever and a joy to read, an upset household for a while! Pray for peace, Best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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I can relate to this and it will soon pass! Love your Triolet, very clever and a joy to read, an upset household for a while! Pray for peace, Best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
We were very fortunate with our two girls, they seemed to sail through their respective puberty's easily, but not togerther. They've remained stable, beautifully composed triolet Debra, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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We were very fortunate with our two girls, they seemed to sail through their respective puberty's easily, but not togerther. They've remained stable, beautifully composed triolet Debra, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you :)
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Welcome
Comment from Harry Smith
Excellent picture selection for a very interesting poem. This is my first time reviewing the poet and really enjoyed the read.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Excellent picture selection for a very interesting poem. This is my first time reviewing the poet and really enjoyed the read.
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you :)
