Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the ultimate gift turns so early a black widow; Typos: wants!to be (wants! To be); She eventially (She eventually); wrong directuon (wrong direction); well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Hey... I think there is a small hiccup at the top:
"Black Widow 2005!"
Written on April 24th, 2018
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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also in the body take a look:
'She's all she ever wants!to be?"
I thought it was a fun and cute read. check those out. yours, diana

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018

Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.