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Precious Gems

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Comment from Harry Smith
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I really like the picture selection for this powerful 5-7-5 poem that has lots and lots of imagery and emotions. The reader enjoyed.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Dear Harry Thank you for yur comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. We are safe when we are in God's hands even when it doesn't seem to go our way we want it to go. He will lead us through the hard times.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Miriam Collins
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Another wonderful poem! I love, "holds me like a sparrow", and like the Bible says how he takes care of the birds, and how much more will he care for us! He is our shelter no matter if we forget he's there. Great job!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Kelsey, Thank you again for your comments and review.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a fantastic and spiritual 5-7-5 poem you've penned, my friend.
Great choice of picture, beautifully done. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Kerry, Thank you for your comments and review, friend. Dove
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 27-Apr-2018
    My pleasure.
Comment from karenina
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Oh! While I feast on this beauty let me bow to your faith! In sharing you hold out hope forvsll teetering on the edge of believing. Jesus mourns every lost soul...
Run to Him, all who need comfort!

Karenina

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by karenina on 27-Apr-2018
    Faith is God's light in our souls......
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how naturally and spiritually a lost soul tells about its earthly shelter that is entirely in God's Hands; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pamusart
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This looks like a Haiku. Or st the very least 5-7-5. There are multiple free contests running around for 5-7-5 poetry. There is one for each month. If you write another one and have not already entered all of those contests, enter the next one! I like your poem. We may all be lost souls. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Dear Pamusart, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from meeshu
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a very good testimonial, Dove. I especially like the image of the sparrow. and using 'shelter' as a verb is a great choice. gives it measure..........meeshu

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
    Dear meeshu, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove