Urban legend
A gentle rapper5 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Astynax I clicked on the "read loud" feature of my computer and one thing I know from listening to my son who is a rapper and that is that nobody can spit out the bars that you wrote with heart and emphasizes on certain words that you intended to blast out but you! So I suggest you to do a live recoding at the bottom and spit it out like you intended for it to be spat. And thats when you'll get a true reaction and the right response to what you're all about. Ask fanstory how to add your audio or go as far as video. Go for it Youngblood. Im gonna be looking out for your pieces.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Astynax I clicked on the "read loud" feature of my computer and one thing I know from listening to my son who is a rapper and that is that nobody can spit out the bars that you wrote with heart and emphasizes on certain words that you intended to blast out but you! So I suggest you to do a live recoding at the bottom and spit it out like you intended for it to be spat. And thats when you'll get a true reaction and the right response to what you're all about. Ask fanstory how to add your audio or go as far as video. Go for it Youngblood. Im gonna be looking out for your pieces.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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sorry i cant rap i am just a writer
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Ok my bad misunderstood.
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Im sorry some of your phrases were like rap phrases. Sorry Writer. Im misinterpreting your name with your name.
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no need for sorry if i could i would i am just not a rapper for the right person i would write
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Yes you have that style
Comment from Sugarray77
I don't believe I have read a poem/song that was a rap before. I must say you did a great job developing it and keeping a logical flow and rhythm going. Well done.
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I don't believe I have read a poem/song that was a rap before. I must say you did a great job developing it and keeping a logical flow and rhythm going. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked it! Would like to see this performed! I could feel the rhythmn and I loved the sentiments too, I was at the gig listening, very much liked, love Dolly x
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I liked it! Would like to see this performed! I could feel the rhythmn and I loved the sentiments too, I was at the gig listening, very much liked, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
What a neat song by a known popular rapper. Seems rapper is voicing frustrations over life's events and expressing his feelings about his struggles with life. Very good sentiments! liberty justice
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What a neat song by a known popular rapper. Seems rapper is voicing frustrations over life's events and expressing his feelings about his struggles with life. Very good sentiments! liberty justice
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Love it! Great job! Flowed effortlessly. Word choices so seemless. This is a wonderful poem you got here.i don't see any problems with grammar or spelling etc.
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Love it! Great job! Flowed effortlessly. Word choices so seemless. This is a wonderful poem you got here.i don't see any problems with grammar or spelling etc.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
