Precious Gems
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Comment from Sugarray77
I like how you have showcased springtime in your poem and also included the Spanish/Italian word for spring 'primavera'. Well done on developing this appropriate to the season verse.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I like how you have showcased springtime in your poem and also included the Spanish/Italian word for spring 'primavera'. Well done on developing this appropriate to the season verse.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Sugarray, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a lovely poem about Spring finally coming, my friend. It's been cold and still snows by me, Nice out today, maybe Springs finally here, lol ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a lovely poem about Spring finally coming, my friend. It's been cold and still snows by me, Nice out today, maybe Springs finally here, lol ~Kerry
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Kerry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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My pleasure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such an uplifting write and gorgeous artwork too, yes primavera! Spring has finally brought the earth to life and your words prove it! A joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Such an uplifting write and gorgeous artwork too, yes primavera! Spring has finally brought the earth to life and your words prove it! A joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Love, Dove
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your lovely verse is a fine tribute to spring. Finally indeed. It seemed like the longest winter ever.
Nice use of the word Primavera, also the name of the flowers in the picture.
Thank you for sharing this lovely verse.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Your lovely verse is a fine tribute to spring. Finally indeed. It seemed like the longest winter ever.
Nice use of the word Primavera, also the name of the flowers in the picture.
Thank you for sharing this lovely verse.
Sharon
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review and for telling me about the name of the flowers in the picture. I didn't even know it! Dove
Comment from RodG
A really nice picture/poem combo.
I like your phrasing & personification of spring taking up residence.
Sometimes another language has the perfect word choice. E.g.--"Primavera."
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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A really nice picture/poem combo.
I like your phrasing & personification of spring taking up residence.
Sometimes another language has the perfect word choice. E.g.--"Primavera."
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Dear RodG, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
