Comment from tomesia jones

Good

This story is cute and silly. I'm a cat person so I got suckered into this. The premise set in a nursing home was believable and I wished that Melvin and Princess would have done some hip hop.

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 Comment Written 30-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Van

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this. As I smiled while reading this, I imagined you probably had as much fun writing it as the reader has reading it. This really was a fun few minutes to get away and immerse myself in a light-hearted bit of fun.

The only suggestion is to put the end quotes at the end of We should be famous.{"}

I'm still smiling at these two.

Thanks for submitting.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

Thanks for your suggestion and your thoughtful review. I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Wow! I had no idea what this story was going to be about when I started reading. Lol. What a great imagination to put two snooty cats together in a nursing home to sing. I really enjoyed the story... this one will stick with me for awhile. Good Job!
Judy

 Comment Written 30-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

This is an excellent humorous continuation of a cat saga or trek through their nine lives. The two Persian cats attend seniors during a monthly visit to a nursing home. While one of seniors plays a piano, the cats start harmonizing with their strong meows. The seniors' responses are to be expected when some like listening to cat serenades and others detest them. The cats are disappointed because there was no applause. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

Thanks for taking time to read and review. I appreciate your positive comments and encouraging words. Elaine

reply by Henry King on 31-May-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

" your singing is my weapon of choice to keep away my enemies." Great line for an codger. Taking hearing out is a good solution, but sure would insult the cats. A fun read.

 Comment Written 25-May-2018

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reply by the author on 25-May-2018

Love your comments, thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

it is so nice of Melvin and Princess to do that every month, even they have their own ulterior motives. I wish them well in shobiz. good write, Mermaids.........meeshu

 Comment Written 24-May-2018

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reply by the author on 25-May-2018

Thanks for reading about these two unusual kitties. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I FOUND this work to be very amusing and very well packaged and presented in all dimensions. I really have no suggestions as how to improve this work in any way and thank this author for a truly fun read! HIS GRAYNESS; VANCE

 Comment Written 24-May-2018

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reply by the author on 25-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Princess and Melvyn sure know how to have a good time don't they, an adventure singing sounds a bit like a cats chorus but they will do better with a bit more practice, he he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-May-2018

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reply by the author on 25-May-2018

Love your comments. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

This is the second story written from the cat's perspective that I've read today. As a cat lover and an cat owner. I immensely enjoyed these stories.

Those poor cats. I guess they were expecting an encore. They should just settle for being patted and rubbed.

Well. let's see what happens next week. Please consider a sequel for these two characters.

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

I am in the processing of writing more Melvin and Princess tales. I have a few in portfolio. Thanks for your positive support and encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from apky

Excellent

Hilarious! I laughed so much my belly is aching.

This is a hoot:

Melvin picks up a stuffed mouse full of catnip. He drops it in front of Princess. "This will make you feel better. There is always next month. Maybe we should try to sing rap or country-western instead."

Wow!

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Love your review and glad you were able to laugh. Thanks for reading and enjoying and your positive comments. Elaine