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Comment from Teri7
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Donna, This is a very well written poem about your mother's month of May. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. My mother was born on New Year Day! January 1st! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the blessings of the month May for your mother and how many important events happen in that month to make it special, birthdays, mothers day, anniversaries, etc.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. DoveDear
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a warm and loving write about your Mother and all the special events in the month of May, such sweet remembrances, and joyful times together, love, Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from karenina
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Mother's Day Month really was chock full of joy for her! My Daughter in law was born on her mother's birthday, in May....and then SHE had her daughter (my granddaughter) on "their" birthday! Talk about what are the odds? Three generations all born on the same day in May! Mother's day is a grand event for the three of them!

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
    Dear Karenina, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove Wow, a triple generation!
Comment from Harry Smith
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Nice picture, nice poem that is full of great imagery. The reader really enjoyed this poem and will be back to read more.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2018
    Dear Harry, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a lovely poem of remembrance. Dates in May that were important to your mom. Your poem is illustrated beautifully and is emotionally reminiscent. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Dear Marilyn, Thank you for your comments and review and reply about Earth Day. Dove
Comment from mvbrooks
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May has always been special to me because I was also born on May 16 -- so naturally I was attracted to and enjoyed your poem. How interesting that the month proved a virtual magnet attracting to many happy events for her.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Dear mybrooks, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Miriam Collins
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I love your poem! It speaks very true to the love of mothers, and your Mom sounds like a beautiful person! It seemed direct, yet had its soft moments just like a momma is supposed to be. I love this line: "One of the most special times bringing us to this earth ". It just reminds me how much mothers love and do for their children. I'm sure your Mom will be very proud to know you wrote such a poem of her. Great Job! And I enjoyed the rhyme scheme as well!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Dear Kelsey, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Miriam Collins on 20-Apr-2018
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