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Everything Is Going To Be Alright

Tears are a blessing from our bodies

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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Everything Is Going To Be Alright", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hello duchess... I'm completely honored by your words of support and thoughtful review. Thank you so much for taking your time to read. yours, diana
Comment from MelB
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Great description of releasing pain and painful memories. I love the last line! It does grant sweet relief to let it all go and let healing begin.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hey Mel B... Crying has a bad rap... there's no crying in poetry right? Not at all... Thanks so much for reading and the stellar review. yours, diana
reply by MelB on 20-Apr-2018
    LOL - So true! But, in my line of work, I see a great deal of it!
Comment from Alex Swan
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I've commented on some of your work already.

On this one, though, I have to comment again because of the eye in your chosen pic. If only we could actually see the vibrant, paisley, reality of our existence -- maybe things would be OK. Maybe.

You've a good eye for art and there's no doubt you're a writer.

Thanks.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Thanks for remembering my work and really big thank you for reviewing again. Your thoughts are important to me. yours, diana
Comment from F Scott Hafner
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Perfect timing - I just opened an email that had very bad news about someone I have grown close to. His life as he knew it is over. Sometimes people are not what you perceive.

Is the art work yours? I suspect not as it lacks proper balance of chaos and order to my eye. If it is yours tell me about it. It is quite good but I suspect you are better.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Frank... You are right... If I were to go into that picture (I love it) but, for me, I would create more depth and stronger colors here and there and probably pop the eye. I don't know better but, It would be different. thanks as always for your review and your conversation. yours, diana
Comment from Zue65
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I believe you, tears do help us de-stress and help make our struggles a bit lighter. Tears become a form of release and a means to cope with problems we confront daily. It is not wrong for a man to cry sometimes because it is a human thing to do so. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    It is a man thing... There is crying in poetry, Tom Hanks (a reference to a movie he was in "A League Of Their Own".) Thanks as always nasals for your thoughtful review. yours, diana
Comment from Boogienights
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I like this thoughtful poem very much. I know I always feel better after a good cry, when things aren't going well in life. This is a stunning image you paired it with, and it certainly adds to your words. Thank for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hey Boogienights... thanks so much for your thoughtful comments and stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Very beautiful. I loved the description you paint of tears: rivers of color grant sweet relief! This is a perfect entry for the four line poem contest. I sense a "winner!" Good luck.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hi Cindy... thanks so much for your stellar review and I'm going on your energy. yours, dianaxo
Comment from Swampfox1
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This is a great entry into the contest. Very good imagery in this poem, especially the last line. Rivers of color, wow. I do see colors every once in a lifetime when I look through tears. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hey swamp fox... thanks so much kiddo for reading and reviewing. yours, diana
reply by Swampfox1 on 19-Apr-2018
    you're welcome
Comment from meeshu
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this is a fine four line poem, Art A. whimsical with a positive spin. I think this should do quite well in the upcoming contest. wishing you good luck.......meeshu

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hey kiddo... thanks for the stellar review and quirky thoughts you/ve shared with me. yours, diana
Comment from karenina
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Oh good gravy marie...another reason to cry! Can't I just eat the right food or exercise or listen to music or all those other tried and true dopamine level increasers? My cheeks are chapped! No more tears for me! (Good poem though)


Karenina

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
    Hey careening... oh good grave girlfriend... it's my party and I'll cry if i want to. Thanks for the review. yours, dianaxo